Spirited Justice
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Comment from karenina
I'm ridiculously patting myself on the back because I was CERTAIN when Eleanor couldn't get that safe open, she'd "materialize" and sure enough, that's what you did! (I was wondering how the actual envelope with the decoy papers also materialized through the closed safe -- since she never opened the safe but exited by slipping through the safe wall again...
Ah! My suspension of disbelief kicked in for a moment but this is Eleanor, right? That woman can do anything!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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I'm ridiculously patting myself on the back because I was CERTAIN when Eleanor couldn't get that safe open, she'd "materialize" and sure enough, that's what you did! (I was wondering how the actual envelope with the decoy papers also materialized through the closed safe -- since she never opened the safe but exited by slipping through the safe wall again...
Ah! My suspension of disbelief kicked in for a moment but this is Eleanor, right? That woman can do anything!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Actually the thought never crossed my mind. After all, it's Eleanor! She can accomplish anything she wants to. I suppose I should have had her open the door fro the inside....but then she can make meals appear with the snap of a finger. LOL Thanks so much for reading.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from AliMom
I really like how this story is developing. The interplay between Jenna and Donatelli is sweet. I'm interested to see where that relationship goes. I don't know much about police work and interrogation but that also seemed realistic. Your pacing is spot on. Having fun reading.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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I really like how this story is developing. The interplay between Jenna and Donatelli is sweet. I'm interested to see where that relationship goes. I don't know much about police work and interrogation but that also seemed realistic. Your pacing is spot on. Having fun reading.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind...Life is throwing me a curve ball at the moment, but I will try to do my best to catch up and thank everyone who takes the tiem to read my stories. I so appreciate.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
I guess Eleanor is not only detective advisor but also matchmaker. I hope her intuition is right about Donatelli for Jenna. What I can't understand is why Eleanor can't just slip through the door like ghosts can.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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I guess Eleanor is not only detective advisor but also matchmaker. I hope her intuition is right about Donatelli for Jenna. What I can't understand is why Eleanor can't just slip through the door like ghosts can.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Oh, yes, Eleanor is much the matchmaker all the time. She has her eyes on her boys and does her best to keep them on the straight and narrow. She can when she wants to ...she can slip through anything, but it wouldn't be as dramatic. LOl
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Weren't other research notes stolen from behind a mirror on the wall? I'm surprised Eleanor would choose to store these notes behind a picture. The part where she enters the safe is humorous. Garth got his info. from Johan rather quickly. Good chapter! Hugs! Carol
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Weren't other research notes stolen from behind a mirror on the wall? I'm surprised Eleanor would choose to store these notes behind a picture. The part where she enters the safe is humorous. Garth got his info. from Johan rather quickly. Good chapter! Hugs! Carol
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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I didn't answer this one until you read the other chapter...does it make sense to you now? Danni did all the work for Garth and Donatelli...she needs to get credit for what she does.
Smiles, Carol
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Yes, it was a good move on Eleanor's part. I forgot she sees into the future. Thanks for waiting till I caught up! Hugs!
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Yes, Danni did a lot of work. It's always good to get a little credit for it.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aw Poor Matthew, I'm hoping you do the decent thing, Carol and make them fall crazy in love! Things are really closing in; they almost have everything they need to wrap up the case.
I loved it that Danni made it easy for Garth, and that he was surprised that she'd done it. Now he has all the names, and his team is looking into them. And Eleanor has managed to get the papers out of Jenna's safe and hidden them in the most obvious place that those looking for them would never consider it. I'm sure Charles will guard them well!! LOL Great chapter, my friend. Now I'm off to the next one. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Aw Poor Matthew, I'm hoping you do the decent thing, Carol and make them fall crazy in love! Things are really closing in; they almost have everything they need to wrap up the case.
I loved it that Danni made it easy for Garth, and that he was surprised that she'd done it. Now he has all the names, and his team is looking into them. And Eleanor has managed to get the papers out of Jenna's safe and hidden them in the most obvious place that those looking for them would never consider it. I'm sure Charles will guard them well!! LOL Great chapter, my friend. Now I'm off to the next one. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Oh, I am so excited and sitting here on pins and needles to see what your reaction is to the next chapter. And of course, I can't wait to follow that one up too... Sparks will be flying.
Thanks for all your generosity and kindness with the book and this chapter. I so appreciate all you do for me.
Hope all is well! Sending my love, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
I'm sure Jenna will be able to get what she wants as well, I definitely feel that there's something there between her and Donatelli and I can't wait to see where you take this part of the story next. Another well written chapter, Carol, I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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I'm sure Jenna will be able to get what she wants as well, I definitely feel that there's something there between her and Donatelli and I can't wait to see where you take this part of the story next. Another well written chapter, Carol, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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I think there might be something brewing between Jenna and Donatelli too! It's the beginning of things to come. Thank you so much for enjoying the chapter.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Teri7
Carol, This is another great chapter you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very good dialogue. I can't wait to see what happens next! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Carol, This is another great chapter you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very good dialogue. I can't wait to see what happens next! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thanks for stopping by Teri to read and enjoy another chapter of the story. We are getting close to wrapping this one up. I appreciate all your support.
Smile, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Well, Jenna and Matthew are off to a slowish start - but they'll get there - how can they not when they have both Danni and Eleanor to help things along. Johan was wise to accept the offer of protection.
Wendy
Edit: ... Isn't that, right?"(remove comma)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Well, Jenna and Matthew are off to a slowish start - but they'll get there - how can they not when they have both Danni and Eleanor to help things along. Johan was wise to accept the offer of protection.
Wendy
Edit: ... Isn't that, right?"(remove comma)
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Good morning, WEndy! Yes, I think things will go slow between these two...neither is sure about telationships and who to trust. Thanks for the review and the comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Esther Brown
Cotton pick! My swear word. I am out of sixes again (Saturday of course). Once again, I forget these are ghostly women and I don't need to worry about their safety when they get in trouble...I adore your stories. Esther
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Cotton pick! My swear word. I am out of sixes again (Saturday of course). Once again, I forget these are ghostly women and I don't need to worry about their safety when they get in trouble...I adore your stories. Esther
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thanks Esther...I am hopefully you will enjoy the next two chapters as well... A few surprises lurking in the shadows. Thanks so much for the support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's kind of like the old saying, "Whether you think you can or can't?" You're right. Most everything you do in life depends on what you think you can do. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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It's kind of like the old saying, "Whether you think you can or can't?" You're right. Most everything you do in life depends on what you think you can do. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Positive thinking! Sometimes it's difficult to grab it and hang on, but if you give it your best shot it usually helps to raise your spirits even if it doesn't work out as planned. Appreciate the thoughts.
Smiles, Carol