Comment from Jasmine Girl

Exceptional

Haha. This is the funniest birthday poem I have ever read for a while because it's for a cat, Patch, our Helen's cat. Even though they were naughty, Helen liked it. They were allowed to be a little of normal for his birthday.

Excellent.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

---

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Hi Lisa, thank you for the most delightful comments for my silly cat poem. Also I want to thank you for the lovely six stars. This is the fourth one in my book and I am hoping to write enough for a children's book. However, then the alcohol lines will have to be changed. LOL. Thanks again my sweet friend. I appreciate it so much. You gave me the biggest smile.
Love, Debi

Comment from cupa tea

Excellent

That's a really cute poem. I like the build up as it goes alone without them knowing they were being recorded. Good job. If it's for a contest good luck!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

---

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Hi cupa tea, I thank you for the most delightful comments for my silly cat poem. This is the fourth one in my book and I am hoping to write enough for a children's book. However, then the alcohol lines will have to be changed. LOL. Thanks again my sweet friend. I appreciate it so much. You gave me the biggest smile.
Love, Debi

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Since I live in Florida, I've been lost for a week in the effects of Hurricane Milton. I'm am back now and greeted by this delightful story poem about Patch, who I already knew, and her cat friends I am just meeting. This is going to be fun, reading about cat antics. I'm looking forward to the mischief they are all about to get into.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

---

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024

Hi Lorraine, I just sent a link to your email for the poem I wrote called
Pray for Florida. You are now listed in the authors notes as one to pray for.
I am not sending this to you to review but I feel so bad that I wasn't thinking at first about you living there. However you were included by just living there.

There were prayers all over for everyone in Florida and the other nearby states. Especially North Carolina. So I am so happy you are back. Did you have any severe damage or injuries in your family.

I am glad these little kitties made you smile. If you look on top of the page there are four poems in the book written for Patch and Ruby. Remember Ruby is my granddaughter, Kenzie's cat.

Thanks so much for the kind comments, sweetie. It is so good to see you. Make sure to check your email. Love ya lots. Let me know how you are doing. Love, Debi

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Exceptional

I love some of the words- meowgaritas and intoxicats - in this very intoxi-cat-ing party between skype friends. Love the artwork of these partying felines. Good fun all round Debi.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

---

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024

Hi Valda, and I love that you liked my fourth story about Patch and Ruby. I am hoping that eventually it will become a real book for children. However I will have to change the alcohol lines then. LOL. Thanks for the sweet comments and for the generous six stars.
Thanks again, my sweet friend. Lotsa love and hugs. Debi

Comment from Sarah Probe 1

Excellent

And in the basement, all these cats

Were dancing in fun party hats

That sounds really adorable for a child's rhyming song, for children who love cats,

Or even for baby rhyme,
Many thanks for such a cute song lyrics style poetry,

best wishes,

Sarah

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

---

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024

Thanks so much, Sarah. I appreciate your kind comments. Yes, this is the fourth poem in the book of Patch and Ruby and hopefully I will make a real book when I get more written.
Thanks again, my sweet friend. Love and hugs!! Debi

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Great artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-Thanks for the notes.
-The cats are out of the bag for this one.
-Very good details about the party planning,
and everyone was having fun.
-I particularly like the fifth verse,
and the concluding verse.
-Very well done, my friend.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

---

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Hi Pam, I thank you for the most delightful comments for my silly cat poem. This is the fourth one in my book and I am hoping to write enough for a children's book. However, then the alcohol lines will have to be changed. LOL. Thanks again my sweet friend. I appreciate it so much. You gave me the biggest smile.
Love, Debi

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

meowgaritas
whisk-E Sour Puss
Catzilla

What a fun piece with brilliant word play, Debi. I enjoyed its entirety and it brightened my day.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

---

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

thank you for the kind comments for my silly cat poem. This is the fourth one in my book and I am hoping to write enough for a children's book. However, then the alcohol lines will have to be changed. LOL. Thanks again my sweet friend. I appreciate it so much.
Love, Debi

Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

A delightful birthday party romp. Clever rhyming and naming. Image is spot on. So, it is one meowgaritas for me and all my best wishes to you. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

---

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Hi Barry, I thank you for the most delightful comments for my silly cat poem. This is the fourth one in my book and I am hoping to write enough for a children's book. However, sorry then the alcohol lines will have to be changed. LOL. Thanks again my dear friend. I appreciate it so much. You gave me the biggest smile.
Love, Debi

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Oh you naughty girl. You went and created a party with the feline pets of some of FanStory's writers. Sounds like they had a heck of a party, a real blow out. Too bad that some had to misbehave, there are usually one or two in every fun situation. Too much alcohol will spoil any party. Thanks for the laugh.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

---

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Hey sweet brother, I thank you for the most delightful comments for my silly cat poem. This is the fourth one in my book and I am hoping to write enough for a children's book. However, then the alcohol lines will have to be changed. LOL. Thanks again my dear BBBB. I appreciate you so much.
You gave me the biggest smile.
Love, Debi

reply by nomi338 on 16-Oct-2024

I do truly love you my sweet Little Sis.

Comment from gansach

Excellent

This is a delightful poem about some mischievous cat pals who have a fun night. Your rhyme is great with an easy story-telling flow, the artwork is fantastic, and the fun hi-jinks are entertaining. I enjoyed this very much, Debi!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

---

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Hi Gail, I thank you for the most delightful comments for my silly cat poem. This is the fourth one in my book and I am hoping to write enough for a children's book. However, then the alcohol lines will have to be changed. LOL. Thanks again my sweet friend. I appreciate it so much. You gave me the biggest smile.
Love, Debi