Opening Ceremony
The symphonic visuals of daybreak... (a 3-6-9 poem)21 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This 3-6-9 is full of energy and action verbs. There is plenty of sound words as well. This poem shows considerable freedom of thought. I sure like the concluding line: Sunrise crowns her horizon with day!
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This 3-6-9 is full of energy and action verbs. There is plenty of sound words as well. This poem shows considerable freedom of thought. I sure like the concluding line: Sunrise crowns her horizon with day!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What an amazing sunrise 3-6-9 suite. I like y9our using of the musical words like "melodic", "resonating" and "crescendo". You combined the sound, visual together into a full symphony experience.
Well done.
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What an amazing sunrise 3-6-9 suite. I like y9our using of the musical words like "melodic", "resonating" and "crescendo". You combined the sound, visual together into a full symphony experience.
Well done.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from patcelaw
I am sorry you didn't get it entered in the contest. It would've been an absolutely wonderful one for the contest and I feel that it may really have one. But this gives you another opportunity to come up with another very beautiful 369 for us to read. Patricia
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I am sorry you didn't get it entered in the contest. It would've been an absolutely wonderful one for the contest and I feel that it may really have one. But this gives you another opportunity to come up with another very beautiful 369 for us to read. Patricia
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If I could not see the sun rising, your poem would certainly bring the scene to my eyes with a vibrant and colourful glow, I so enjoyed your fine presentation Yvette, love Dolly x
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If I could not see the sun rising, your poem would certainly bring the scene to my eyes with a vibrant and colourful glow, I so enjoyed your fine presentation Yvette, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
Comment from Janet Foor
What a beautiful sunrise in your artwork and it your fits your poem perfectly. Lovely personification throughout the piece. Excellent message as we see the sun rise. Well done. Sorry you didn't make it into the contest.
Blessings
Janet
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What a beautiful sunrise in your artwork and it your fits your poem perfectly. Lovely personification throughout the piece. Excellent message as we see the sun rise. Well done. Sorry you didn't make it into the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Yvette,
This is a well done 3-6-9 poem that well describes dawns and the soft sounds before the birds start to sing. The artwork matches well.
I like the music metaphor.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful day.
Joan
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Hi Yvette,
This is a well done 3-6-9 poem that well describes dawns and the soft sounds before the birds start to sing. The artwork matches well.
I like the music metaphor.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful day.
Joan
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I love the picture. So colorful. It is beautiful. The poem captures the picture very well. The poem is well written and descriptive. Great job.
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I love the picture. So colorful. It is beautiful. The poem captures the picture very well. The poem is well written and descriptive. Great job.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Yvette.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-A very good opening verse with the
beginning of sunrise, a "melodic sonata."
-A good second verse about how
it is "felt not heard."
-A very good closing verse showing
the glory of the sunrise as it bursts forth.
-Sorry you missed the contest, but it is a good poem.
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Yvette.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-A very good opening verse with the
beginning of sunrise, a "melodic sonata."
-A good second verse about how
it is "felt not heard."
-A very good closing verse showing
the glory of the sunrise as it bursts forth.
-Sorry you missed the contest, but it is a good poem.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
Comment from kahpot
"Bright shadows" "As passionate strains rise..." Well for a (Dizzy Blonde) you are really good at this (poetry) what beautiful words that enhance your chosen artwork, very well written and presented****kahpot
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"Bright shadows" "As passionate strains rise..." Well for a (Dizzy Blonde) you are really good at this (poetry) what beautiful words that enhance your chosen artwork, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
Comment from Daniel Milton Taylor
Yvette, sorry you missed the contest deadline. This is a great 3-6-9 poem that completely covers the bases with the contest rules and paints an awesome picture of Gods' Opening Ceremony in all of its wonderful glory.
God bless, Daniel
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Yvette, sorry you missed the contest deadline. This is a great 3-6-9 poem that completely covers the bases with the contest rules and paints an awesome picture of Gods' Opening Ceremony in all of its wonderful glory.
God bless, Daniel
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024