Prime Mover
A Nonet26 total reviews
Comment from Senyai
Hi DonandVicki,
Excellent nonet! Loving the beautiful waves shown to enhance your beautiful words about the vastness and power of God. His presence is so immense we cannot fathom Him yet so personal, His spirit sits on our shoulders at the same time.
Love your work. Good luck!
All the best,
Senyai
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Hi DonandVicki,
Excellent nonet! Loving the beautiful waves shown to enhance your beautiful words about the vastness and power of God. His presence is so immense we cannot fathom Him yet so personal, His spirit sits on our shoulders at the same time.
Love your work. Good luck!
All the best,
Senyai
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you so very much, Senyai.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Witnessing the waves hitting the rocks with such mighty strength is a vivid image here in your poem, the power of this action is something man cannot fight against. Your nonet is powerful and full of nature's force, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Witnessing the waves hitting the rocks with such mighty strength is a vivid image here in your poem, the power of this action is something man cannot fight against. Your nonet is powerful and full of nature's force, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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You are always so kind, Dolly.
Comment from estory
I liked how the poem wound in on itself, nice job with the form, and it created a nice rhythm in the language. I wonder if, considering the theme here of God's world being beyond our comprehension, that it would be better if you had turned it upside down and had the lines opening out and getting longer and longer, going beyond reach. Something to think about. estory
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I liked how the poem wound in on itself, nice job with the form, and it created a nice rhythm in the language. I wonder if, considering the theme here of God's world being beyond our comprehension, that it would be better if you had turned it upside down and had the lines opening out and getting longer and longer, going beyond reach. Something to think about. estory
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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A good idea, but a nonet goes 9-8-7-6... sylables. Top to bottom. I do agree with you though, it would flow better.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Wow, all I can think of is majesty! The poem is majestic and the message powerful. Like the ocean waves, it felt refreshing, yet something more... strong.
Thanks for sharing this poem,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Wow, all I can think of is majesty! The poem is majestic and the message powerful. Like the ocean waves, it felt refreshing, yet something more... strong.
Thanks for sharing this poem,
Rhonda
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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You are so kind and generous, Rhonda. Don
Comment from Barry Penfold
Love the image and the poem. Appears to meet all the competition requirements. Thanks for sharing and all the best in the contest. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Love the image and the poem. Appears to meet all the competition requirements. Thanks for sharing and all the best in the contest. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you so very much, Barry.
Comment from Jacob1395
For me this made me think of the power of nature and how it is something we cannot control as a species, that's the image I had in my as I was reading it. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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For me this made me think of the power of nature and how it is something we cannot control as a species, that's the image I had in my as I was reading it. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you so very much, Jacob.
Comment from ESOSTINE
I find the Nonet interesting, portraying the power of the oceans. The imagery of used in describing the waves and the awesomeness of God is very creative. Thanks for sharing your inspiration, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I find the Nonet interesting, portraying the power of the oceans. The imagery of used in describing the waves and the awesomeness of God is very creative. Thanks for sharing your inspiration, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you so very much.
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful Nonet poem for the contest.
Lovely imagery throughout. I enjoyed the message of power and might of God's amazing creation.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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A beautiful Nonet poem for the contest.
Lovely imagery throughout. I enjoyed the message of power and might of God's amazing creation.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much Janet.
Comment from Nicki.B
I love this Nonet that portrays the power of the ocean or the sea of course. I live in a seaside and spend a lot of time listening to the waves crashing off the Shoreline rocks. I love the term Alpha and Omega, I had to look it up to remind me what it meant, what a lovely addition to the poem.
We always say never underestimate the power of the sea! Well done and good luck with contest!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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I love this Nonet that portrays the power of the ocean or the sea of course. I live in a seaside and spend a lot of time listening to the waves crashing off the Shoreline rocks. I love the term Alpha and Omega, I had to look it up to remind me what it meant, what a lovely addition to the poem.
We always say never underestimate the power of the sea! Well done and good luck with contest!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review, Niki.
Comment from Neonewman
Rhythmic waves-
This was a beautifully, powerful beginning to this incredible piece. I love the ocean and it's beaches. I could listen to the waves rolling in for hours.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Rhythmic waves-
This was a beautifully, powerful beginning to this incredible piece. I love the ocean and it's beaches. I could listen to the waves rolling in for hours.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review, Steve.
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My pleasure.