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Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Bill's Version"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! At least Bill got his truck back, and a share of the profits the man made, but I bet it came nowhere near the $100 check he gave him. It sounds like a lot of people were there, and was that me with Dolly, two English roses??? Lol. Well done, my friend, that was fun! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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LOL! At least Bill got his truck back, and a share of the profits the man made, but I bet it came nowhere near the $100 check he gave him. It sounds like a lot of people were there, and was that me with Dolly, two English roses??? Lol. Well done, my friend, that was fun! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Oh, yeah, a wonderfully 'in character' edition to this insanity... fun? yes! but a bit insane and oh, so enjoyable..! :-) ;-) So, he didn't even save you a couple pints of blueberries for some cobbler or something, eh? Thanx for sharing the smiles, sir! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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LOL!! Oh, yeah, a wonderfully 'in character' edition to this insanity... fun? yes! but a bit insane and oh, so enjoyable..! :-) ;-) So, he didn't even save you a couple pints of blueberries for some cobbler or something, eh? Thanx for sharing the smiles, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Yvette.
Comment from nomi338
They say there is one born every second or so, Fool that is, I wonder how many times you have been born and reborn. Something tells me that you were spotted from long distance, and the con was put into place before you even got close to your first encounter. But I guess all ends well, until the next episode.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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They say there is one born every second or so, Fool that is, I wonder how many times you have been born and reborn. Something tells me that you were spotted from long distance, and the con was put into place before you even got close to your first encounter. But I guess all ends well, until the next episode.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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I recommend selling blueberries to Canada.
Comment from patcelaw
This is wonderfully written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is really loud. It also has very good structure and I appreciate that and you have a wonderful day and may you have a good weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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This is wonderfully written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is really loud. It also has very good structure and I appreciate that and you have a wonderful day and may you have a good weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Patricia
Comment from Ulla
Hahaha, yeah that all makes a whole lot of sense, but then again it is you writing after all. I just love it. I can so visualise that truck covered in blueberries. Great contribution, Bill. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Hahaha, yeah that all makes a whole lot of sense, but then again it is you writing after all. I just love it. I can so visualise that truck covered in blueberries. Great contribution, Bill. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Ulla.
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I'm glad you got your truck back. You made it sound like a hotel no one wants to go to! And I wouldn't have scattered off upon seeing you! You know I'd want to chat with "Santa Claus" about his sea worm suit.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Well, I'm glad you got your truck back. You made it sound like a hotel no one wants to go to! And I wouldn't have scattered off upon seeing you! You know I'd want to chat with "Santa Claus" about his sea worm suit.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I didn't know what I would say to you, and I didn't want to be cheeky.
Comment from judiverse
This is fun. I think the highlight is the "valet" who demanded $100. Love the money Bill had. At least he got his truck back in one piece, although he'll have to clean up the grape stain. You introduced several of the attendees with fun comments. Very delightful. judi
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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This is fun. I think the highlight is the "valet" who demanded $100. Love the money Bill had. At least he got his truck back in one piece, although he'll have to clean up the grape stain. You introduced several of the attendees with fun comments. Very delightful. judi
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Judi.
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You're welcome. Great story. judi
Comment from Wendy G
Very well done - loved the humour you have presented here. Your account of the events is different and unique, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done. A great addition to the others.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Very well done - loved the humour you have presented here. Your account of the events is different and unique, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done. A great addition to the others.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Wendy.
Comment from jim vecchio
Sound like the Fanstory get-together took place in Green Acres. So sad about your razor. Mine had an affair with a cootie. They're just not faithful, those razors. Other than that, seemed like everything was about normal at the party.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Sound like the Fanstory get-together took place in Green Acres. So sad about your razor. Mine had an affair with a cootie. They're just not faithful, those razors. Other than that, seemed like everything was about normal at the party.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I've replaced the razor with a comb.
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These days, my comb doesn't have so much work to do.
Comment from BethShelby
LOL, I love your version. I thought that truck was gone forever. You don't seem concerned about the non-existent cover charge the rest of us didn't pay. I would never have recognized you without your seaworm persona. It doesn't sound like you hung around long. I guess the food wasn't that good after having people's faces in it.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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LOL, I love your version. I thought that truck was gone forever. You don't seem concerned about the non-existent cover charge the rest of us didn't pay. I would never have recognized you without your seaworm persona. It doesn't sound like you hung around long. I guess the food wasn't that good after having people's faces in it.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I didn't notice the October 31 deadline until it was November.