Unexpected Delivery
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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
What a great uplifting story. One of hope and mystery. Sometimes things just work out. This is a great surprise 80 word story
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
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What a great uplifting story. One of hope and mystery. Sometimes things just work out. This is a great surprise 80 word story
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
Comment from lancellot
You have incorporated the theme successfully for your character, and you give the readers the reasons behind the surprise and the results the surprise brings to her. Now, I suggest a recount, because I count 81 words.
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You have incorporated the theme successfully for your character, and you give the readers the reasons behind the surprise and the results the surprise brings to her. Now, I suggest a recount, because I count 81 words.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024