Of Christmas Bizz
A longwinded fantasy4 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
Beautifully written. You've endorsed the true meaning of the occasion, the Birth of Jesus and a time of loving and sharing as a family. What a pity it's become so commercialized. Best wishes to you and your family. Hope Santa is good to you.
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Beautifully written. You've endorsed the true meaning of the occasion, the Birth of Jesus and a time of loving and sharing as a family. What a pity it's become so commercialized. Best wishes to you and your family. Hope Santa is good to you.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from evilynne
An interesting thought provoking poem about what we are blessed with at Christmas time and the plight of those in need. It would be wonderful if everyone could extend a helping hand to those who are homeless or otherwise needy. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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An interesting thought provoking poem about what we are blessed with at Christmas time and the plight of those in need. It would be wonderful if everyone could extend a helping hand to those who are homeless or otherwise needy. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Evi. Your review is much appreciated. Claire
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem, my friend relays the spirit of care and love for others, giving hope to those who are in need. This is the meaning of Christmas, and you penned it well with those passionate stories. Thanks for sharing your work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Your poem, my friend relays the spirit of care and love for others, giving hope to those who are in need. This is the meaning of Christmas, and you penned it well with those passionate stories. Thanks for sharing your work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your review, and your encouragement.
Comment from Beejay
I liked the style of your work ,it was refreshing and unique.The simplicity of the language reinforces the poems sincere message. You have a gift for creating verses that resonate deeply.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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I liked the style of your work ,it was refreshing and unique.The simplicity of the language reinforces the poems sincere message. You have a gift for creating verses that resonate deeply.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Wow! Thank you so much for this review; I have had a trying day, and I feel cheered. I'm okay; just cheesed off until now..