Let It Snow
A 5-7-5 contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
I'm at my daughters in Florida for
the holidays...i live in Illinois....I miss
the snow...and hope to get home soon...
I love your poem...picture perfect...
very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
I'm at my daughters in Florida for
the holidays...i live in Illinois....I miss
the snow...and hope to get home soon...
I love your poem...picture perfect...
very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Thank you ever so much for your review. I really appreciate your comments. xoxo
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you are so very welcome sweet girl...
love xxoo
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Let It Snow, has the proper formatting and suggests, with this image, that the woodland critters are waiting for snow while standing in it.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
This 5-7-5, Let It Snow, has the proper formatting and suggests, with this image, that the woodland critters are waiting for snow while standing in it.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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It supposed to encompass the whole poem- waiting for snow and the results. I do appreciate your observations and comments. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your haiku, "Let It Snow," succinctly captures the anticipation and hope of winter's arrival, evoking a sense of wonder and nostalgia. The imagery of "eyes on winter watch" is vivid, setting a scene of eager waiting. The focus on the first snowflake brings a delicate, almost magical feeling that perfectly aligns with the festive spirit of Christmas.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
Your haiku, "Let It Snow," succinctly captures the anticipation and hope of winter's arrival, evoking a sense of wonder and nostalgia. The imagery of "eyes on winter watch" is vivid, setting a scene of eager waiting. The focus on the first snowflake brings a delicate, almost magical feeling that perfectly aligns with the festive spirit of Christmas.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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I truly appreciate your review. Thank you ever so much for your comments.
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Take care and stay safe
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Bless you