Goodbye
Letting go of your loved one after death.3 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
The cycle of life. After just reading your wonderful little Christmas story, this poem brings us back to life with a thud. The revolving circle. When things are bad, they most always will get better, all but once. And when things are great and all of life seems perfect, just get ready, because things will fall to pieces in a hurry. And I just realized how many more words I've used in this review, than the number in your poem. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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The cycle of life. After just reading your wonderful little Christmas story, this poem brings us back to life with a thud. The revolving circle. When things are bad, they most always will get better, all but once. And when things are great and all of life seems perfect, just get ready, because things will fall to pieces in a hurry. And I just realized how many more words I've used in this review, than the number in your poem. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Yes we do have to get creative with the amount of words that we use on reviews so that it takes. Yeah, the shock of my stepson passing away October 1 definitely rocks your World for a while. Thank you again for your review.
Comment from RodG
Sadly, this is a situation many of us can relate to. Grief-stricken, we can do nothing more but spread our loved one's ashes. You convey this message clearly and succinctly here.
Rod
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Sadly, this is a situation many of us can relate to. Grief-stricken, we can do nothing more but spread our loved one's ashes. You convey this message clearly and succinctly here.
Rod
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you Rod. Although I have not experienced spreading the ashes, we do have an urn our bookshelf that holds my 36-year-old stepson.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We say goodbye but our loved ones remain in our hearts forever, a poignant write for the 5-7-5 contest and I wish you luck. We hope that spreading the ashes will quell some of the grief we feel when someone dies, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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We say goodbye but our loved ones remain in our hearts forever, a poignant write for the 5-7-5 contest and I wish you luck. We hope that spreading the ashes will quell some of the grief we feel when someone dies, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Yes, I've never spread ashes before, but we do have an urn with a loved one. One of my good friends recently spread the ashes of her 26 yr old son. She found a few different beautiful spots in California. Thank you for your review.