Exercise Mouse
Witty Animal Contest3 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
LOL...I swear this is what the mice I once
had did in the traps I put out...I used
cheese and peanut butter...when I would
goes back to see the traps...the food was
always gone...and the traps were sprung...
I love your poem...and love the picture...
very clever...and very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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LOL...I swear this is what the mice I once
had did in the traps I put out...I used
cheese and peanut butter...when I would
goes back to see the traps...the food was
always gone...and the traps were sprung...
I love your poem...and love the picture...
very clever...and very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you Linda. I loved your story. I had smiled experience with squirrel in the attic. I appreciate your review and kind words.
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your so very welcome...
I also had the same problem with
some squirrels in our attic...LOL...
by the time my husband and I found
them...they had babies...and it was winter...so we let them stay until
spring...when they were older and could take care of themselves...then
we invited them out...and plug the hole they were coming in...funny thing...they never went to far away...think it could have been the tons of peanuts I fed every squirrel
in the entire neighborhood?...but I did stop giving them the ones in shells...I had empty shells all over my yard...but they seemed the love the ones in jars as well...good figure...Thank You for your kind words...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from RodG
Great cartoon. I can almost visualize a mouse doing weights.
I like how the mouse is personified as the Speaker talking to us. Indeed your 5-7-5 is witty and made me chuckle. Rod
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Great cartoon. I can almost visualize a mouse doing weights.
I like how the mouse is personified as the Speaker talking to us. Indeed your 5-7-5 is witty and made me chuckle. Rod
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your review. From the picture I could read the mouse's mind. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a cute witty animal 5-7-5 poem. It is only three lines, but the wittiness is there. The picture compliments the poem well.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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This is a cute witty animal 5-7-5 poem. It is only three lines, but the wittiness is there. The picture compliments the poem well.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you for review. I appreciate your kind words and good luck wish.
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You're welcome