A Day Off
This is a poem about solitude on a day without work.4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Welcome to the site Serinus,
You will learn a lot here and maybe make a few new friends.
This is a wonderful poem about being home alone. Sometimes it can be good and sometimes bad.
Congrats on tying for third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
P S I would like you to know I recently published my first book title, "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available
on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile bio.
I couldn't have done it without the help and encouragement of fellow Fanstorians.
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Welcome to the site Serinus,
You will learn a lot here and maybe make a few new friends.
This is a wonderful poem about being home alone. Sometimes it can be good and sometimes bad.
Congrats on tying for third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
P S I would like you to know I recently published my first book title, "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available
on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile bio.
I couldn't have done it without the help and encouragement of fellow Fanstorians.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
Comment from artisart4u
Your acrostic poem is nice.
I like the picture you used and the way you put this together.
Good luck in the contest and with your Milestone Post in the future.
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Your acrostic poem is nice.
I like the picture you used and the way you put this together.
Good luck in the contest and with your Milestone Post in the future.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a fun thought of the morning waving back! ;) A great touch of humanity encompassed in work and adulthood with the accent (always!) of the child within... Congrats on your first post! ;)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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What a fun thought of the morning waving back! ;) A great touch of humanity encompassed in work and adulthood with the accent (always!) of the child within... Congrats on your first post! ;)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your feedback!!!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Wepcome! Congratulations on your first milestone post! You've written a very good acrostic poem with much imagery and emotion. Good image yoo
Excellent work! I enjoyed reading this. Best wishes to you, Alex
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Wepcome! Congratulations on your first milestone post! You've written a very good acrostic poem with much imagery and emotion. Good image yoo
Excellent work! I enjoyed reading this. Best wishes to you, Alex
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you!!!
