The Rape
Dark Sonnet - after reading William Butler Yeats153 total reviews
Comment from Vladilynn
Ohh my gosh!!! It really happens this kind of crime every where even inside a home. Poor women and man also . There's a lot of beast all over the world . You've showed how your words flow out the screen very vivid and believable. Very well done !!!!
Live much,
Lynn:0)
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2012
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Ohh my gosh!!! It really happens this kind of crime every where even inside a home. Poor women and man also . There's a lot of beast all over the world . You've showed how your words flow out the screen very vivid and believable. Very well done !!!!
Live much,
Lynn:0)
Comment Written 03-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2012
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This kind of a crime is going on as we speak.
Unfortunately there is no stopping it.
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very true:(
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Sigh.
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Hey!!! Congratulations for this one!!! WOW! It's a winning piece, of course it's a winning piece!!!:)
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Heheh thanks again you!!!
Comment from daniaa
I hope this never nappen to any one, That is really bad to be to some one,
It is nice but make me ungry about the bad evils like that, good case you wrote about good luck
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2012
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I hope this never nappen to any one, That is really bad to be to some one,
It is nice but make me ungry about the bad evils like that, good case you wrote about good luck
Comment Written 29-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2012
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So many thanks Dania. It won't happen if you
are careful.
Comment from cwmartz
Leda and the Swan is one of my favorite pieces of writing, you have taken a more direct route here but still it's very powerful, self gratification at an immense cost to another. I'm a male, not a very big one, and was once threatened by a large woman that she was "gonna take me to the back a' the store for some fun", well, ya know, some males might daydream that that kind of a spontaneous sexual encounter is somehow fun but I tell ya, I was scared, and just wanted out, and she was reasonably attractive, but that had nothing to do with it. It was the violation. Anyway, there was a commotion that happened and I fled from the store. I think more men should experience something like that.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012
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Leda and the Swan is one of my favorite pieces of writing, you have taken a more direct route here but still it's very powerful, self gratification at an immense cost to another. I'm a male, not a very big one, and was once threatened by a large woman that she was "gonna take me to the back a' the store for some fun", well, ya know, some males might daydream that that kind of a spontaneous sexual encounter is somehow fun but I tell ya, I was scared, and just wanted out, and she was reasonably attractive, but that had nothing to do with it. It was the violation. Anyway, there was a commotion that happened and I fled from the store. I think more men should experience something like that.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012
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CW thank you for telling me about that experience. I agree wholeheartedly. The fear instilled in one is enough, never mind anything actually happening.
Comment from PedrosA5LeggedDonkey
You have a talent for writing. Your poetry puts a hand on a reader's shoulder and says "Ok, check this out, you can leave when I'm done".
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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You have a talent for writing. Your poetry puts a hand on a reader's shoulder and says "Ok, check this out, you can leave when I'm done".
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Thanks you so very very much Pedros.
This was an exceptional choice to
make to read.
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Poem of the month, All time best, Recognized, it was the right choice to read.
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Thank you so much Pedros.
Comment from kernssca
Have to sadly agree with the note that you made. Although this is the harsh reality that often happens, the less brutal version of rape is the one that is most common. I am sad to have to live with the reality of knowing a victim that had a drunk and helpless encounter with a former friend. Though in cases like these the victim puts the blame on herself and the rapist counts the act as a conquest.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2012
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Have to sadly agree with the note that you made. Although this is the harsh reality that often happens, the less brutal version of rape is the one that is most common. I am sad to have to live with the reality of knowing a victim that had a drunk and helpless encounter with a former friend. Though in cases like these the victim puts the blame on herself and the rapist counts the act as a conquest.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your comments on this. It's only too sad you felt it only rated a four. Your comments have been taken very seriously.
Comment from Amsterdam
This is Amsterdam, only put this
Because it said elaborate more.
And so..............
No Rhyme or Reason.
You know who it is.
;)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2012
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This is Amsterdam, only put this
Because it said elaborate more.
And so..............
No Rhyme or Reason.
You know who it is.
;)
Comment Written 23-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2012
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Thanks Amsterdam for a great review.
I do? Hmmmmm.
Comment from ArmyWife07
This was very good. I can definitely see why it won poem of the month. You detailed this perfectly in a way that you made sure it was focused on rape and not just sex. Its disgusting that people actually do that. This poem is amazingly written. Excellent work!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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This was very good. I can definitely see why it won poem of the month. You detailed this perfectly in a way that you made sure it was focused on rape and not just sex. Its disgusting that people actually do that. This poem is amazingly written. Excellent work!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this one girl. Yes it is disgusting that people actually do such a thing. Sigh.
Comment from Nhala
oh my god. this is beyond disturbing and it is real, which makes it absolutly horrifying. Fantastic and superb job making this reality come to life with your images and words. I can feel that Dark Hand and the Power of being totally helpless, alone, afraid, violated, and scarred. It is worthy of its alcolades, as terrible as it is. U know what I mean dear. Sorry you had to go there in order to speak out about something so real. I daresay this is going on at all times somewhere in the world. Ack
Ravenbrand
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2012
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oh my god. this is beyond disturbing and it is real, which makes it absolutly horrifying. Fantastic and superb job making this reality come to life with your images and words. I can feel that Dark Hand and the Power of being totally helpless, alone, afraid, violated, and scarred. It is worthy of its alcolades, as terrible as it is. U know what I mean dear. Sorry you had to go there in order to speak out about something so real. I daresay this is going on at all times somewhere in the world. Ack
Ravenbrand
Comment Written 06-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2012
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It wasn't a true story Nhala so you can rest assured of that. But yes, it goes on all the time.
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i knew it wasn't but needed to express my review that way to make the point i wanted. i think lol nice hun
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Thanks Byron!!
Comment from Oldsteamer
They say it is about power? Is this what happens when we objectify women? Don't these men understand how wonderful and mysterious
and funny it is hanging out with a great chick? Are they socially inept?
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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They say it is about power? Is this what happens when we objectify women? Don't these men understand how wonderful and mysterious
and funny it is hanging out with a great chick? Are they socially inept?
Comment Written 23-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2012
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They must be -R= for it still goes on. Thank you so much for going back to this. You honor me sir.
Comment from Shalini Honey
Hello there...
Such a wonderful and meaningful poem from you...
I love this ending part very much
In shame, this virgin now in silence cries,
her innocence upon a dark street lies.
and it has a powerful meaning! Well done and congratulations to you!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2012
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Hello there...
Such a wonderful and meaningful poem from you...
I love this ending part very much
In shame, this virgin now in silence cries,
her innocence upon a dark street lies.
and it has a powerful meaning! Well done and congratulations to you!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2012
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Thanks Shalini. I sure do appreciate you reading
and reviewing this one.