Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 65 "part one, Chapter 20"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from NaughtieScribe
How much is Anna going to suffer. Troy is a wreck and I feel for both of them. I'm glad Bobby and his mother got what they deserved. Yet I'm so afraid that this story may have too realistic an ending. Here's hoping I'm wrong.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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How much is Anna going to suffer. Troy is a wreck and I feel for both of them. I'm glad Bobby and his mother got what they deserved. Yet I'm so afraid that this story may have too realistic an ending. Here's hoping I'm wrong.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Roberta Joan Jensen
Troy stared toward the recovery room double doors and crept [to] them. --- "Toward" means he didn't reach them, but he opens them so he got there.
That's mean to leave them sitting there for two hours wondering if Anna coded. ER personnel ought to have more consideration.
Roberta
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Troy stared toward the recovery room double doors and crept [to] them. --- "Toward" means he didn't reach them, but he opens them so he got there.
That's mean to leave them sitting there for two hours wondering if Anna coded. ER personnel ought to have more consideration.
Roberta
Comment Written 31-May-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Leen1
Thank you for another wonderful Chapter which truly outlines the affects of domestic abuse. I sincerely hope your decision to rethink the romantic classification does not take away from the story concept. I'm thinking that with a romantic view the woman becomes aware that if not treasured by one, she is surely capable of being treasured by another. I have enjoyed each Chapter read, keep up the good work,as it is truly worthy of the honors received.
reply by the author on 10-May-2012
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Thank you for another wonderful Chapter which truly outlines the affects of domestic abuse. I sincerely hope your decision to rethink the romantic classification does not take away from the story concept. I'm thinking that with a romantic view the woman becomes aware that if not treasured by one, she is surely capable of being treasured by another. I have enjoyed each Chapter read, keep up the good work,as it is truly worthy of the honors received.
Comment Written 10-May-2012
reply by the author on 10-May-2012
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My story will remain the same. I am just fearful that it doesn't fit a true romance novel.
Comment from guinea
From what I read of this chapter, your book is going to be amazing. The characters seem real to me. I hope to meet Anna soon. good job.
reply by the author on 10-May-2012
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From what I read of this chapter, your book is going to be amazing. The characters seem real to me. I hope to meet Anna soon. good job.
Comment Written 10-May-2012
reply by the author on 10-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from xxjsfuncxxxity
An effective transitionary section to an interesting, compelling plot. Well written with good, believable dialogue. I liked the italicized thoughts and the way they were tastefully juxtaposed throughout the piece.
My favorite line... " I'm sorry the bastard could only die once." Really great!
Good work. Keep going...
cheers
js
reply by the author on 10-May-2012
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An effective transitionary section to an interesting, compelling plot. Well written with good, believable dialogue. I liked the italicized thoughts and the way they were tastefully juxtaposed throughout the piece.
My favorite line... " I'm sorry the bastard could only die once." Really great!
Good work. Keep going...
cheers
js
Comment Written 10-May-2012
reply by the author on 10-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from gifted$1
I haven't read the whole thing, but I enjoyed what you posted here. The tension of a possible cold blue is enough to keep the reader moving along. I like the situation you are presenting in that you have a man who desires to rescue a woman who has been beaten. You are using your writing to promote the end of violence..what a wonderful idea. Keep going..looking forward to more. Now, I have to go back to Chapter 1!
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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I haven't read the whole thing, but I enjoyed what you posted here. The tension of a possible cold blue is enough to keep the reader moving along. I like the situation you are presenting in that you have a man who desires to rescue a woman who has been beaten. You are using your writing to promote the end of violence..what a wonderful idea. Keep going..looking forward to more. Now, I have to go back to Chapter 1!
Comment Written 09-May-2012
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review,
Comment from Connie P
I'm glad Anna made it. Very well done. I didn't see any corrections needed, but I'm reading from my phone. Connie
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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I'm glad Anna made it. Very well done. I didn't see any corrections needed, but I'm reading from my phone. Connie
Comment Written 09-May-2012
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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Thank you for your kind review, I appreciate you keeping up.
Comment from ivydevine
Believe it or not an easy read although Im a newbie. I really hope Anna will realize if she doesn't kill her own demons she will bring them with her in this new relationship
We make our own choices and sometimes we revert to what we are familiar with..in her case being controlled and hurt
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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Believe it or not an easy read although Im a newbie. I really hope Anna will realize if she doesn't kill her own demons she will bring them with her in this new relationship
We make our own choices and sometimes we revert to what we are familiar with..in her case being controlled and hurt
Comment Written 09-May-2012
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Fluffyhead
I think it stand alone just fine,but have been following this story for quite some time. Glad Anna is ok. I hate dog fighters and people who beat their partners.
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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I think it stand alone just fine,but have been following this story for quite some time. Glad Anna is ok. I hate dog fighters and people who beat their partners.
Comment Written 08-May-2012
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Allison78
I think I like this chapter even better than the last, not that there was anything wrong with the last! It just had a great mixture of intrigue and emotion. Wonderful job!
reply by the author on 08-May-2012
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I think I like this chapter even better than the last, not that there was anything wrong with the last! It just had a great mixture of intrigue and emotion. Wonderful job!
Comment Written 08-May-2012
reply by the author on 08-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.