The Old Red Rooster Crowed
Quatrains40 total reviews
Comment from HittorX
Dark! I love it! A chill down the spine AS I was with her in her nightmare. Wonderfully scary and well written. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
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Dark! I love it! A chill down the spine AS I was with her in her nightmare. Wonderfully scary and well written. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
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Hey you were there? Amazing eh?
Comment from artemis53
Excellent. We all have demons that can rise with the slightest inkling for we're more fragile than we appear. Yes. I ward mine off by getting out of my head.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Excellent. We all have demons that can rise with the slightest inkling for we're more fragile than we appear. Yes. I ward mine off by getting out of my head.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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That's really good Arte. Getting out of your head eh? Heheh sounds ominous.
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Yep. Of course, I'm kicking and screaming the whole time ;)
Comment from elgone
This would have been a great Halloween poem, I think. It tells a scary tale most of us can relate to. We've all be a little frightened on a spooky night. I enjoyed the chilling imagery.
E
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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This would have been a great Halloween poem, I think. It tells a scary tale most of us can relate to. We've all be a little frightened on a spooky night. I enjoyed the chilling imagery.
E
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Hey tanks El for a great review. It was wonderful.
Comment from Just2Write
What an engaging poem - not the restful kind of engaging - but it sure holds on to you. sometimes demons do crowd into our lives - and getting rid of them is hard - even when we know the best songs to molify them. I liked your poem it makes one mindful of the netherworld and what lurks there for each of us. Rose.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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What an engaging poem - not the restful kind of engaging - but it sure holds on to you. sometimes demons do crowd into our lives - and getting rid of them is hard - even when we know the best songs to molify them. I liked your poem it makes one mindful of the netherworld and what lurks there for each of us. Rose.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Thanks so much Rose for a great review of this one.
Guess we'd all better watch eh?
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Maybe - can't see much from under my bed though.
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LOL you, get out of there now!!
Comment from Ed2039
A really engaging piece that just draws you through the stanzas. Demons come in all forms and for all reasons, I've smacked mine down and rest easy from them, my own thoughts do enough damage! LOL ;-) Good work, Gungalo!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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A really engaging piece that just draws you through the stanzas. Demons come in all forms and for all reasons, I've smacked mine down and rest easy from them, my own thoughts do enough damage! LOL ;-) Good work, Gungalo!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Thanks Ed for proving they can be overcome. Great review you.
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;-) on all four reviews! Thnx Gungalo!
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Smile.
Comment from Thatguypk
Aw, you poor thing. I hope you don't have to sleep alone tonight!
"Faded crinkled wallpaper,
brown with age and family dirt,
stared back at her through patches
that seemed alive and reaching."
Love this verse, and the image it brings to my mind.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Aw, you poor thing. I hope you don't have to sleep alone tonight!
"Faded crinkled wallpaper,
brown with age and family dirt,
stared back at her through patches
that seemed alive and reaching."
Love this verse, and the image it brings to my mind.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Hey thank you so much Guy. You made it so I could go to sleep.
Thanks for that!!
Comment from jjstar
Oh, baby..this was a creeper. I thought it was magnificent. I'd give you a six, but would like to save it for something recently posted. I just read Dawn's Power of Suggestion, so had to go read this. It's just superb..every word! :)
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Oh, baby..this was a creeper. I thought it was magnificent. I'd give you a six, but would like to save it for something recently posted. I just read Dawn's Power of Suggestion, so had to go read this. It's just superb..every word! :)
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thanks you but do you see where she wad coming from? Oh well.
Comment from fastdigits
A fascinating tale of loneliness interestingly
portrayed starting with your wonderful
choice of art work, which then your words
paint this artistic picture of depression
in the shadowy world of demons that
take over the mind.
Well done
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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A fascinating tale of loneliness interestingly
portrayed starting with your wonderful
choice of art work, which then your words
paint this artistic picture of depression
in the shadowy world of demons that
take over the mind.
Well done
Comment Written 11-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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Thanks so much Fastdgits for a wonderful review of this one. I loved it.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is well written my friend a dark poem with so much imagery throughout you have done very well with this well presented poem regards Jill
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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This is well written my friend a dark poem with so much imagery throughout you have done very well with this well presented poem regards Jill
Comment Written 11-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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It was really dark, eh Jill? Thanks you.
Comment from cjsthoughts
Another Quatrains! Love the title and the picture goes amazingly with your writing!
Afraid to sleep alone?
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This is fabulous!
Thanks again
Cheryl
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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Another Quatrains! Love the title and the picture goes amazingly with your writing!
Afraid to sleep alone?
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This is fabulous!
Thanks again
Cheryl
Comment Written 11-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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Thanks so much Cheryl for a great review of this one.