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Comment from 9999pool
Okay, I got the message. it's a hoot. Hope I got the answer correct. This is hilarious, asuming you meant it to be.
The first and the last word did make one word.
I am sure other reviewers have not missed that.
Whoever initiated this writing prompt is in for a big surprise and i will not be surprise if this write wins.
Excellent write and well done on a very creative and complicated suject (LOL).
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Okay, I got the message. it's a hoot. Hope I got the answer correct. This is hilarious, asuming you meant it to be.
The first and the last word did make one word.
I am sure other reviewers have not missed that.
Whoever initiated this writing prompt is in for a big surprise and i will not be surprise if this write wins.
Excellent write and well done on a very creative and complicated suject (LOL).
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 23-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Thank you for digging for this one and for the positive review. Bill
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I am glad i didn't miss out this one. Looks like hoots of the unusual kind is one of your strong writing skills - blastant truths can sell here, i am sure, lol.
Cheerio, Rithcie. :))
Comment from Sueellen11
Well done,, this is a great entry into this contest,,, that picture is different,,, can't put words to it,,, true to contest requirements,,, and count,,good luck,,blessings,,sueellen
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Well done,, this is a great entry into this contest,,, that picture is different,,, can't put words to it,,, true to contest requirements,,, and count,,good luck,,blessings,,sueellen
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Rmocruz
You have satisfied the writing prompt format.
Vortex awaiting one to be sucked in, be it water or air.
An interesting ambiguous worthy entry.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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You have satisfied the writing prompt format.
Vortex awaiting one to be sucked in, be it water or air.
An interesting ambiguous worthy entry.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for checking this chapter out. I will try to get them some alone time.
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You're welcome Bill.
Comment from RYME4U
This is done in a clever manner. I like how you separate 'assimilate" out into two lines and then the top and bottom words summ it up. Nicely done. Subtle.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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This is done in a clever manner. I like how you separate 'assimilate" out into two lines and then the top and bottom words summ it up. Nicely done. Subtle.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from pbroussard209
I loved it. It took me a few times reading it to catch on, (I can be thick like that.) but once I did it gave me a chuckle. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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I loved it. It took me a few times reading it to catch on, (I can be thick like that.) but once I did it gave me a chuckle. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Cookie333
Assimilate into death, do I have to? Can't I go down kicking and screaming, maybe just delay the inevitable for a moment?
This was fantastic, I shall check the booth
Thank you
K
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Assimilate into death, do I have to? Can't I go down kicking and screaming, maybe just delay the inevitable for a moment?
This was fantastic, I shall check the booth
Thank you
K
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from tfawcus
Clever! I like the suggestion that the asshole is digging his own grave through his actions. So many of us do! You have achieved a wealth of meaning in your eleven syllables. The crucible of reduction sometimes forms some sparkling crystals.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Clever! I like the suggestion that the asshole is digging his own grave through his actions. So many of us do! You have achieved a wealth of meaning in your eleven syllables. The crucible of reduction sometimes forms some sparkling crystals.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the encouraging review. I like the minimalist approach as well.
Comment from Mark Alan Trimeloni
Ass
-imilate into death. Dig my own
hole
I like the play on words between ass and hole. I can't stop myself. The use of the word ass gets you six stars.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Ass
-imilate into death. Dig my own
hole
I like the play on words between ass and hole. I can't stop myself. The use of the word ass gets you six stars.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from MzNiki
OMG! Crack me up!! This is so funny, in a most excellent manner! Loved your train of thinking and creativity. Great picture to couple your 1-9-1 with. I really enjoy reviewing these and yours was outstanding! Good luck in the contest, you have my vote! Keep up the groovy work!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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OMG! Crack me up!! This is so funny, in a most excellent manner! Loved your train of thinking and creativity. Great picture to couple your 1-9-1 with. I really enjoy reviewing these and yours was outstanding! Good luck in the contest, you have my vote! Keep up the groovy work!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, MzNiki, for the sterling review.