Tall Tales and Short Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "My very own self"Personal growth stories for children
24 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
My very own self, congratulation on your contest win, that's a very lovley story poem. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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My very own self, congratulation on your contest win, that's a very lovley story poem. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Thanks for the well wishes and the comments. I appreciate you, Carolyn
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your welcome,Hugs!Lakepor
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your welcome,Hugs!Lakepor
Comment from 9999pool
This is an absolutely brilliant write!
A truly inspirational and motivational write and I loved it for children to know themselves, practice and develop into good citizens.
The form is simple and suitable for children to read too. A virtual ****** as this late in the week, all my stars have gone to heaven. Smiles.
Great work. Well done! Bravo!!
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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This is an absolutely brilliant write!
A truly inspirational and motivational write and I loved it for children to know themselves, practice and develop into good citizens.
The form is simple and suitable for children to read too. A virtual ****** as this late in the week, all my stars have gone to heaven. Smiles.
Great work. Well done! Bravo!!
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you Ritchie for the glowing review. I am glad you enjoyed it. I will treasure the virtual stars. :-) Carolyn
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Hi Carolyn,
You do have a flair with children and I am sure Faith will take after your wonderful traits if you are able to spend more time teaching her the ropes of life, LOL.
A little 'Carolyn' will be a welcome change as she is as witty and smart as you, smiles.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
Comment from emjaihammond
I liked this poem written for children. It has entertainment value of course, but even more than that
it teaches the children a good lesson about being who we
each are intended to be. There is no one quite like you. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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I liked this poem written for children. It has entertainment value of course, but even more than that
it teaches the children a good lesson about being who we
each are intended to be. There is no one quite like you. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much. This poem was a joy to write and I am so glad you liked it. Children can motivate children. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Terra Dane
Great picture choice, and a fun flow for children. Of course, I hope the room isn't always tidy and the books come off the shelf.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Great picture choice, and a fun flow for children. Of course, I hope the room isn't always tidy and the books come off the shelf.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Funny thing about tidy. It always starts with untidy. :-) So glad you enjoyed this motivational poem. :-) Carolyn
Comment from goompa
A very sweet children's poem deserving of recognition. Perfect rhyming and meter. I'm going to have my kids memorize it.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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A very sweet children's poem deserving of recognition. Perfect rhyming and meter. I'm going to have my kids memorize it.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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goompa, I love your penname. Thank you for enjoying this and I would love to hear your kids recite the poem. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Cookie333
I do believe this one met the prompt the best, uplifting and related to the 'motivational' theme. Congratulations and I do thank you for sharing it with us.
karen
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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I do believe this one met the prompt the best, uplifting and related to the 'motivational' theme. Congratulations and I do thank you for sharing it with us.
karen
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you Karen for this wonderful review. It was my first win, I was delighted that so many of you enjoyed it. Carolyn
Comment from pattipac
Your motivational poem for children is filled with admiral things that every child's parent would like for their child to accomplish before starting school.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Your motivational poem for children is filled with admiral things that every child's parent would like for their child to accomplish before starting school.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Thanks for a great review and rating, I am so happy you liked this, it was fun to write. Little kids are pretty smart ! :-) Carolyn
Comment from adewpearl
Congratulations on your contest win :-)
solid use of abcb rhyming
This definitely provides motivation for a child to behave - I like the illustrative examples :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Congratulations on your contest win :-)
solid use of abcb rhyming
This definitely provides motivation for a child to behave - I like the illustrative examples :-) Brooke
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Thanks Brooke, this was my first win so I am especially pleased it was a 'children's' piece. I always appreciate your reviews. :0) Carolyn
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this poem about a child being respectful of their things and their language. congrats on the win
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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this is very well written, notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this poem about a child being respectful of their things and their language. congrats on the win
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Thanks you so much, it was a pleasure to write. Carolyn
Comment from AlvinTEthington
This is an excellent poem, picturing the innocence of childhood. I like the emphasis on a healthy desire for order. I like how this shows a healthy desire to grow up responsible and kind.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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This is an excellent poem, picturing the innocence of childhood. I like the emphasis on a healthy desire for order. I like how this shows a healthy desire to grow up responsible and kind.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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If we lead by 'motivated example', it just might work. Thank you so very much, your review and rating is amazing, Carolyn
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I am so glad you won the contest. Apparently I cast the deciding vote. I was seriously thinking of leaving FanStory (and I am on the faculty here!) if that obnoxious poem by Teddy Bears All won. Congratulations!