Tall Tales and Short Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Animals at play"Personal growth stories for children
26 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Animals at play, indeed it is always fun to go to a zoo or circus, that's a beautiful expressed poem. nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
Animals at play, indeed it is always fun to go to a zoo or circus, that's a beautiful expressed poem. nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it. :-) Carolyn
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your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from Spitfire
Children would love this with all the movement: swinging, swimming, jumping, diving and hopping. What fun they could have acting it out. Very cute!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
Children would love this with all the movement: swinging, swimming, jumping, diving and hopping. What fun they could have acting it out. Very cute!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
thanks Shari, fun review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Petriesan
nope, we never could name them all. . .it amazed me how many different species there really and truly are and how many come into existence every year...
nice fun poem for kids
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
nope, we never could name them all. . .it amazed me how many different species there really and truly are and how many come into existence every year...
nice fun poem for kids
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Thanks for this wonderful review. Creation is a wondrous thing.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
I must be in my second childhood with a little mind, because I love reading things that are written simply and are easy to understand. I really enjoyed your cute poem.
Kat
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
Hi Carolyn,
I must be in my second childhood with a little mind, because I love reading things that are written simply and are easy to understand. I really enjoyed your cute poem.
Kat
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Thanks Kat, Dylan might enjoy hearing this one. Tell him his #1 fan, Carolyn wrote it. :-)
Comment from emrpoems
An adorable little poem well written to amuse children.
Quatrains with some perfect and imperfect abcb rhymes.Surely a beautiful poem easily read and enjoyed
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
An adorable little poem well written to amuse children.
Quatrains with some perfect and imperfect abcb rhymes.Surely a beautiful poem easily read and enjoyed
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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My thanks to you for this great review and rating. I am glad you enjoyed Animals at play. :-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
Very nice poem written in quatrains. LOvely for young children, Carolyn. I liked it. It reads very smoothly. Great job. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
Very nice poem written in quatrains. LOvely for young children, Carolyn. I liked it. It reads very smoothly. Great job. Miss Sally
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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I appreciate your wonderful comments. Thank you so much, :-) Carolyn
Comment from BLACKDYKE
'Just a little kids poem' which
I find entertaining to notesandmore.
Funny and enjoyable and well put
together with picture to match.
A easily rhyming and rhythmic piece
for a quite afternoon. Eric
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
'Just a little kids poem' which
I find entertaining to notesandmore.
Funny and enjoyable and well put
together with picture to match.
A easily rhyming and rhythmic piece
for a quite afternoon. Eric
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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I am delighted you enjoyed reading Animals at play. Thanks for this great review. :-) Carolyn
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My pleasure
Comment from Curly Girly
I enjoyed reading this fun kids' poem about animals. Children do enjoy visiting the zoo and watching them. Animals are wonderful tools for learning and exploring our precious earth.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
I enjoyed reading this fun kids' poem about animals. Children do enjoy visiting the zoo and watching them. Animals are wonderful tools for learning and exploring our precious earth.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Thanks Nicole, I'm glad you enjoyed this one, and I appreciate the great comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Ben Colder
A delightful poem for children. You did good with this. I thought of Dr. Zeus and other children books. Well done poet. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
A delightful poem for children. You did good with this. I thought of Dr. Zeus and other children books. Well done poet. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Thanks Ben Colder for this wonderful review. Glad you liked Animals at play. Dr. Zeus, hmmmmmmmm. :-) Carolyn
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a happy verse and I really think that children would enjoy it. The imagery of each animal and the little bit of information you give with each is both entertaining and educational. I loved the imagery and the emotion to this. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
This was a happy verse and I really think that children would enjoy it. The imagery of each animal and the little bit of information you give with each is both entertaining and educational. I loved the imagery and the emotion to this. Nicely done.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Many thanks for this great review. I am happy you enjoyed Animals at play. :-) Carolyn