Young mushroom
Moral: Don't climb without legs.5 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
The art work is great and the words very interesting.
I guess one would be be sad if they have no legs.
honey tree
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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The art work is great and the words very interesting.
I guess one would be be sad if they have no legs.
honey tree
Comment Written 25-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from caromel
Very whimsical and clever piece. The rhymes didn't seem forced. Great photo choice as well. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Very whimsical and clever piece. The rhymes didn't seem forced. Great photo choice as well. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Thank you for your review. Kind and generous isit.
Comment from BeasPeas
Fun, clever and original personification of a mushroom. Brings a smile. Nice colors in accompanying image. Limerick rhymes well, took some forethought.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Fun, clever and original personification of a mushroom. Brings a smile. Nice colors in accompanying image. Limerick rhymes well, took some forethought.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Thank for your kind and generous review!
Comment from kiwisteveh
You've nailed the form of the Limerick, but the humour is not really there because the parts don't really relate to each other - mushroom, no legs, ladder - even a nonsense poem has to have some sort of connecting logic....
Steve
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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You've nailed the form of the Limerick, but the humour is not really there because the parts don't really relate to each other - mushroom, no legs, ladder - even a nonsense poem has to have some sort of connecting logic....
Steve
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Thank you for your constructive review! It's my first attempt at this poetic discipline! I do agree with the poor humour. I have never read a limerick I thought was funny yet, or even clever! Perhaps I will this time! Thank you for your honest review.Roy
Comment from donaldcolson
Nice limerick. Have not seen any of these here before so you get the innovation prize. What do you think about leaving out-----so I'll-----. Unless there is a formal requirement don
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Nice limerick. Have not seen any of these here before so you get the innovation prize. What do you think about leaving out-----so I'll-----. Unless there is a formal requirement don
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Thank you Donald, for your very kind review. Its my fist attempt at this poetry form, but I'll have another look! Thank you and hello again. Roy.