Politicians.
Political games.12 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, many if not most of them have far better benefits than me and my family have. As far as the side dishes, who can say for certain. Your first letter in every line of this poem spells out TWA. Is that a sublime hint that you long to board an airline jet and fly,just to get away from it all for a while?
Anyhow, nice job and good luck.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Well, many if not most of them have far better benefits than me and my family have. As far as the side dishes, who can say for certain. Your first letter in every line of this poem spells out TWA. Is that a sublime hint that you long to board an airline jet and fly,just to get away from it all for a while?
Anyhow, nice job and good luck.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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That's very clever Dean, noticing that! The short answer is no! But I'll accept it! Thank you for your upbeat commentary!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from reconciled
I believe that what ever they approve for the people is what they should have...no special side dishes...very well said...very well written
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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I believe that what ever they approve for the people is what they should have...no special side dishes...very well said...very well written
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for your kind and generous review!
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
you have the correct line and syllable count
your few words ask the question with politicians what are the side dishes
we often wonder
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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good luck in the contest
you have the correct line and syllable count
your few words ask the question with politicians what are the side dishes
we often wonder
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you for your kind, encouraging and generous review
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welcome...SC
Comment from Domino 2
Thanks very much for entering, mystery writer.
To meet the 'sexual innuendo' requirement, your last line must be cleverly insinuating the politicians' 'side dishes' are their sexual affairs.
Good luck, Ted
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thanks very much for entering, mystery writer.
To meet the 'sexual innuendo' requirement, your last line must be cleverly insinuating the politicians' 'side dishes' are their sexual affairs.
Good luck, Ted
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you for your kind and explicit review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is cute. mystery writer, since most politicians have their deserts on the side and their main entree they're married to. i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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this is cute. mystery writer, since most politicians have their deserts on the side and their main entree they're married to. i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you for your kind and generous review!
Comment from GracieAnn
This IT'S ALL A GAME writing prompt entry fulfills the elements of the contest with perfect syllable and line count, it does not rhyme, has no picture, but it does not have this element, "ENTRIES MUST HAVE FUN SEXUAL INUENDO, BUT NOT COARSE ENOUGH FOR A REVIEWER 'WARNING'". I'd prefer it the way you did do it about those scoundrels, but you may have to tweak it if feel you must to qualify. Personally, I see no reason to do the inuendo, but it is not mine to have any say. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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This IT'S ALL A GAME writing prompt entry fulfills the elements of the contest with perfect syllable and line count, it does not rhyme, has no picture, but it does not have this element, "ENTRIES MUST HAVE FUN SEXUAL INUENDO, BUT NOT COARSE ENOUGH FOR A REVIEWER 'WARNING'". I'd prefer it the way you did do it about those scoundrels, but you may have to tweak it if feel you must to qualify. Personally, I see no reason to do the inuendo, but it is not mine to have any say. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you for your tip and great review. I must be a twit!
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I see you changed it and it works with a double meaning without being overtly sexual. Nice save. A twit is one who refuses to adjust and you are not a twit. :0 GracieAnn
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Thank you Gracie! You are an outstanding example of compassion!
Comment from seaglass
This 5-7-5 poem declares the painful truth. What they believe is directly attached to where they get the most money. It is very sad but mostly disgusting.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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This 5-7-5 poem declares the painful truth. What they believe is directly attached to where they get the most money. It is very sad but mostly disgusting.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for your affinity! A wonderful review, thank you.
Comment from DonandVicki
I would imagine it's all a money game with most politicians. Good 5-7-5 and well composed with timely issues. Good write. Don and Vicki
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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I would imagine it's all a money game with most politicians. Good 5-7-5 and well composed with timely issues. Good write. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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I hope I didn't stir up a hornet's nest! I actually feel sorry for them! I wouldn't be one for all the tea in China! They evoke a lot of emotion , particularly in the U.S. Thank you for great, empathic comments!
Comment from TAB_that's me
Your 5-7-5 poem has the perfect syllable and line count. Politicians all play a game. Good luck in the contest.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Your 5-7-5 poem has the perfect syllable and line count. Politicians all play a game. Good luck in the contest.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you Teresa, for your kindness and your generous review. Its a little " tongue in cheek. "
Comment from Cajungirl
Your contest entry meets all the contest requirements for a 5 7 5. This is a very good poem the line and syllable counts are correct. Good luck
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Your contest entry meets all the contest requirements for a 5 7 5. This is a very good poem the line and syllable counts are correct. Good luck
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you For your review! for your your the only one that thought I had a wrong syllable count! tian is one syllable!