Comment from victor 66

Excellent

I have not a tried a '2-10-2' poem but sometime I'd like to give it a shot. Your poem looks like a good example. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014

Thanks for the review. I like this style, like haiku's big brother. Cheers

reply by victor 66 on 03-Apr-2014

You are welcome. I like that term, "haiku's big brother". And Cheers, to you.

Comment from Leen1

Excellent

Excellent truth in the words of this piece. Thank you for giving us a reminder that we have been blessed with so much. A well written piece.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014

thanks for the review

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Amen to that, I would have to agree.

Nice positive message fortified by a strong, faith backed conviction. Great presentation with the picture of the praying girl/woman.

You've done very well with so few words.

Good luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014

Thanks for the review, I am still counting.. hah

reply by Dean Kuch on 02-Apr-2014

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Comment from Cariboubill

Excellent

Very nice! Light and positive. Seems that is the best outlook for a 2-10-2 poem. Cute picture, too. Reflects that wonderful feeling that you wake up with on a spring morning.
...Bill

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014

Thanks for the nice review

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

What a lovely little poem! There is so much said in so few words, and giving thanks for blessings, keeping a positive thought, is such an inspirational message. Good luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014

Thanks for the review, I am grateful

reply by Dawn Munro on 02-Apr-2014

My pleasure.

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Beautifully done. You said so much in only fourteen syllables. We should more time counting our blessing than complaining about what we done have. best of luck in the contes.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thanks for the review,i am grateful.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Oh how sweet. When we start counting our blessings we realize that there are more than we thought. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thanks for the review, I am grateful

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

today
i gave thanks for the blessings in my life
lost count

Syllable count is spot on 2-10-2, but I wouldn't expect it not to be. I think this poem would be awesome stitched on a pillow and placed on the couch for everyone to see.

John

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thanks for the review, start stitching

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a very nice 2-10-2 poem with a positive, cheerful message. The syllable count is correct according to contest rules. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thanks for the review, I am grateful

Comment from Lovinia

Excellent

Hi Mystery Poet

An important message in a few lines. I love the sense of spirit and of fun. A very cute image to complement your work. It is wonderful you have such great faith and can relay it with wit and humour. well done. Good luck in the contest. Warmest Regards - Lovinia xoxoxo .

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thanks for the review, I am grateful

reply by Lovinia on 02-Apr-2014

My pleasure. Lovi xoxo