Listen
Look, listen, touch, taste and smell spring.2 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
Although not a requirement of the prompt, I think that rhyming the first and last lines as you have done adds a certain circularity and strength to the form. You have achieved a remarkable sensory appeal in these few short lines!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Although not a requirement of the prompt, I think that rhyming the first and last lines as you have done adds a certain circularity and strength to the form. You have achieved a remarkable sensory appeal in these few short lines!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thank you for reviewing and indicating what you liked.
Comment from Ben Colder
Look close at the thunder head in the east . The photo says rain is on the way. Nice worded poem. The count is right on . Best to you in the contest. Shalom.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Look close at the thunder head in the east . The photo says rain is on the way. Nice worded poem. The count is right on . Best to you in the contest. Shalom.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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thank you for reviewing.