The Bard of Bel Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Diamond Dancer & Working Lincoln"A homeless man sees more than people realize.
16 total reviews
Comment from seaglass
So far, besides Bard, Lucy is my favorite character. Oh how I could have used her when I had all those ornery foster teens. lol Now a crazy uncle? what could be better. Still looks like a movie to me.
"I owe you (won). I haven't..." (one)
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So far, besides Bard, Lucy is my favorite character. Oh how I could have used her when I had all those ornery foster teens. lol Now a crazy uncle? what could be better. Still looks like a movie to me.
"I owe you (won). I haven't..." (one)
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
Comment from Tatarka2
Again, congratulations on great character development and a storyline that continues to intrigue the reader. This seems to be moving along at just the right pace, at this point. I also love the inclusion of cryogenics to the plot. It seems very original and intriguing in itself. This has been interesting to read and follow.
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Again, congratulations on great character development and a storyline that continues to intrigue the reader. This seems to be moving along at just the right pace, at this point. I also love the inclusion of cryogenics to the plot. It seems very original and intriguing in itself. This has been interesting to read and follow.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
Comment from Darkhorse555
loved the image mikey i always look upon the harp as angelic She had never heard a harp play anything but angel music excellent read dear friend beautifully penned as always
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loved the image mikey i always look upon the harp as angelic She had never heard a harp play anything but angel music excellent read dear friend beautifully penned as always
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
Comment from Nosha17
The story has become very meaty, which is good as it holds the interest. The characters are all interesting and likeable. The narrative and descriptions are good and it was a great chapter as always. I am a bit behind with reviews as I am busy preparing my next book for the publisher. I may vanish soon if I get too busy to post, but not for good. Hope you continue to review my poems, I value your opinion. Faye
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The story has become very meaty, which is good as it holds the interest. The characters are all interesting and likeable. The narrative and descriptions are good and it was a great chapter as always. I am a bit behind with reviews as I am busy preparing my next book for the publisher. I may vanish soon if I get too busy to post, but not for good. Hope you continue to review my poems, I value your opinion. Faye
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, and the nuggets of information keep on coming as the plot goes deeper and the frustration of not finding a monetary link to Ruby makes the anticipation grow. Interesting direction. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, and the nuggets of information keep on coming as the plot goes deeper and the frustration of not finding a monetary link to Ruby makes the anticipation grow. Interesting direction. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
Comment from Sankey
Another interesting Mikey trip, mate. Good work interesting meandering through your head mate. Some spags and some comments.
out from bel(-l)ow or is that a deliberate spelling error?
a couple (of)hours
11 kids must be nearly time for Maria to turn up from the Convent huh!
"I owe you won??. I haven't had an outing
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Another interesting Mikey trip, mate. Good work interesting meandering through your head mate. Some spags and some comments.
out from bel(-l)ow or is that a deliberate spelling error?
a couple (of)hours
11 kids must be nearly time for Maria to turn up from the Convent huh!
"I owe you won??. I haven't had an outing
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
Comment from l.raven
Hi Michael, don't like to say...did you mean...I owe you one...love Lucy with the kids...a natural...and Bard got some pretty good stuff out of the trash...lets see what they find...next!!! Luff Linda xxoo
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Hi Michael, don't like to say...did you mean...I owe you one...love Lucy with the kids...a natural...and Bard got some pretty good stuff out of the trash...lets see what they find...next!!! Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
Comment from country ranch writer
I OWE YOU WON SHOULD BE ONE MIKEY SOUNDS LIKE A MIXED UP FAMILY WITH PEOPLE SOME WHAAT OUT OF KILTER BUT IT IS KIND OF MYSTERIOUS TOO
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I OWE YOU WON SHOULD BE ONE MIKEY SOUNDS LIKE A MIXED UP FAMILY WITH PEOPLE SOME WHAAT OUT OF KILTER BUT IT IS KIND OF MYSTERIOUS TOO
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
Comment from Millibrad
Uhmm, I wonder if there are any surprises in the will. An excellent plot is developing. Suspense is building. What can Lincoln tell Lucy, I wonder? Will Tenaya be able to unravel the puzzle that is The Bard?
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Uhmm, I wonder if there are any surprises in the will. An excellent plot is developing. Suspense is building. What can Lincoln tell Lucy, I wonder? Will Tenaya be able to unravel the puzzle that is The Bard?
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Blackwell had already passed here[her?] on the road as she drove up.
"I owe you won.[one]
You'd never think she heard the old adage,"The Butler did it?" LOL There's a couple of spags I detected.
Do you think kids under five foot tall know they are under five foot? Maybe the older ones. How many kids? Who do they belong to?
Looking forward to more. Nancy
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Blackwell had already passed here[her?] on the road as she drove up.
"I owe you won.[one]
You'd never think she heard the old adage,"The Butler did it?" LOL There's a couple of spags I detected.
Do you think kids under five foot tall know they are under five foot? Maybe the older ones. How many kids? Who do they belong to?
Looking forward to more. Nancy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014