Home Sweet Home
Home is where the heart is5 total reviews
Comment from Domino 2
Hi, Daphne.
Whenever I've been on holiday or away anywhere, I've always loved returning to the familiarity and comfort of home, so I agree completely with your sentiments.
You highlight extremely well many simple yet important examples of our personal 'treasures'.
Best wishes, Ted
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
Hi, Daphne.
Whenever I've been on holiday or away anywhere, I've always loved returning to the familiarity and comfort of home, so I agree completely with your sentiments.
You highlight extremely well many simple yet important examples of our personal 'treasures'.
Best wishes, Ted
Comment Written 09-May-2014
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
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It is a good thing that I love my home as I am largely homebound these days . My husband needs constant care but in these surroundings that is not difficult. Thank you, Ted, for sharing my homely feelings.
Comment from Debra White
Hi :) thank you for entering the contest. I enjoyed your entry. Nice rhythm and well executed abcb rhyme scheme. Your home sounds like a treasure trove and somewhere to feel welcome. Kindest regards, Debra :)
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
Hi :) thank you for entering the contest. I enjoyed your entry. Nice rhythm and well executed abcb rhyme scheme. Your home sounds like a treasure trove and somewhere to feel welcome. Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the trouble to comment so favourably on my homely piece.You are welcome any time!
Comment from sgalletti
Nice description with specific concrete images of what the essential ingredients are of a "home." I hate to move, but when I do the first thing I do is hang the pictures and enjoy the special memories of what I unpack. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
Nice description with specific concrete images of what the essential ingredients are of a "home." I hate to move, but when I do the first thing I do is hang the pictures and enjoy the special memories of what I unpack. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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I appreciate your warm comments and good luck wishes.I once had to move overnight with our children and our belongings were put into storage by my husband. Eighteen months later we were all together again and we unpacked our goodies in a new home.You can just imagine the joy of that unpacking!
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I can!!!!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
That's terrific. You do a great job of painting the interior of a home. It makes me want to live there! Good word choices. I like the formatting for this contest entry. Great job.
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
That's terrific. You do a great job of painting the interior of a home. It makes me want to live there! Good word choices. I like the formatting for this contest entry. Great job.
Comment Written 02-May-2014
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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Thank you for a wonderful review. You'd be welcome in our home!
Comment from Jackarrie
I like your poem about home, it is basically what most of us experience. I particularly like the paintings photos and the artifacts that we pick up over the years that give us both our memories and pleasure.
good luck in the contest. Mary
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
I like your poem about home, it is basically what most of us experience. I particularly like the paintings photos and the artifacts that we pick up over the years that give us both our memories and pleasure.
good luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 02-May-2014
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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Once again you give me a boost. Thank you, Mary , for your encouragement.