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Sundown Delight

6 word poem contest

9 total reviews 
Comment from bdumalili
Excellent
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The thought flowed naturally with rhyme through an appropraite structure, presented strong images and conveyed message on nature. I would recommend it for others to read.

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

reply by the author on 22-May-2014
    Thank you bdumalili, for your kind and encouraging review!
Comment from nelliesellie
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I love the poem Sunset is beautiful. It gives you a chance to get rid of the bad times that happened during the day. It gives you the chance to enjoy the happiness of the day and gives you strength to find that same happiness in another day. Great work.

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

reply by the author on 22-May-2014
    Thank you nelliesellie, for your kind words and encouraging review!
Comment from Jumbo J
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Hi...

A wonderful prospectively written six worded poem... it had a nice ring to it and the words fitted the picture with a certain clarity... well done... all the very best in the contest.

With our thoughts we create,
a visual impression,
James.

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

reply by the author on 21-May-2014
    Thank you James, for this encouraging and kind review!
Comment from angel123
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I enjoyed reading your interesting poem. It flows and rhymes well and you followed the contest rules. Good luck in the contest.

angel123

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

reply by the author on 21-May-2014
    Thank you for your kindness and encouraging review!
Comment from RYME4U
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This one is very well expressed and the rhymes are a delightful added touch. Very vivid description. You did a great job here.

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

reply by the author on 21-May-2014
    Thank you RYME4U, for your kind and encouraging review!
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Exceptional
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Great use of appropriate rhyming words in such a short poem.

You create a powerful mental image of one of my favorite mountain scenes,

Roger, Marilyn's writing partners

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

reply by the author on 21-May-2014
    WOW! Thank you so much for your kindness and generous review! I am honored by the six stars. I feel inspired to write more! Thank you!
Comment from Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest

your six words paint the image well of the twilight on the mountain at sundown

cheers..Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 20-May-2014

reply by the author on 20-May-2014
    Thank you Smoothiecool, for your kind and encouraging review!
reply by Smoothiecool on 21-May-2014
    most welcome..SC
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Great job. You say so much with just six words. A beautiful image is painted here with so few words. Very creative and well written.

 Comment Written 20-May-2014

reply by the author on 20-May-2014
    Thank you Michael, for your kind and encouraging review!
Comment from Janie King
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Awesome...I could never say something that much sense with so few words. I'm too wordy and I'm not a poet. Great job. Good luck. God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 20-May-2014

reply by the author on 20-May-2014
    Thank you Janie, for your kind and encouraging review!