Faith:
i PRAYED LONG FOR THESE WORDS22 total reviews
Comment from NurseBarb
It is obvious your prayer was answered in praying for guidance as you have turned out a beautiful and inspiring poem here. Thank you for sharing this with all of us to see.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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It is obvious your prayer was answered in praying for guidance as you have turned out a beautiful and inspiring poem here. Thank you for sharing this with all of us to see.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
Sincere thanks NurseBarb! I appreciate your kind review and hope to see you again soon! Vance
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Absolutely, Vance.
Comment from GracieAnn
Vance, this Faith Poetry Contest entry has solid rhyme and meter. The message is a resounding honor to our Lord. I like the line Faith is an act of conscious commitment because it is so true. All the best in the contest, my friend. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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Vance, this Faith Poetry Contest entry has solid rhyme and meter. The message is a resounding honor to our Lord. I like the line Faith is an act of conscious commitment because it is so true. All the best in the contest, my friend. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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THANKS SO MUCH GRACIE ANN...ALWAYS DELIGHTFUL TO HEAR FROM YOU!! VANCE
Comment from adewpearl
solid rhyming couplets
powerful use of high-impact verbs
a compelling prayer of appreciation with good use of examples of those many things the speaker is grateful for
good alliteration in conscious commitment
I like the shift halfway through to the POV of God, the Creator
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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solid rhyming couplets
powerful use of high-impact verbs
a compelling prayer of appreciation with good use of examples of those many things the speaker is grateful for
good alliteration in conscious commitment
I like the shift halfway through to the POV of God, the Creator
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 03-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much Brooke...always sincerely appreciated. Vance
Comment from robina1978
Vance, you excel yourself for this contest. Apart from the last stanza all rhyming couplets. I absolutely adored the artwork. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Vance, you excel yourself for this contest. Apart from the last stanza all rhyming couplets. I absolutely adored the artwork. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much robina!! always a delight and gift to hear from you! Blessings! Vance
Comment from Glasstruth
Nature is God's creation which got me involved right away with the storm and clouds. It is a life, a gift, and you, writing it as if it came straight from Him is awesome. Really a great message! Les
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Nature is God's creation which got me involved right away with the storm and clouds. It is a life, a gift, and you, writing it as if it came straight from Him is awesome. Really a great message! Les
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Dear Les: this is the third time I've replied to your wonderful review so I hope at least one finally gets through with the BIG thank you and my sincere appreciation for your great review. Vance
Comment from val fitchie
heartfelt via the soul and then elegantly presented through your creative consciousness .....this consciousness is proof of the Creator, because consciousness can PERCEIVE OF a creator-If said consciousness can ALSO THINK and FEEL the Creator, then TOTAL LIFE EXPERIENCE of the CREATOR ....IS the "proof" Any physical "scientific proof" at this point would be subject to ONLY THE "LAWS" AS WE ARE CURRENTLY AWARE OF-THEREFORE, SCIENTIFIC ANALYSIS IS FLAWED.(EX:SCIENCE SECRETLY STATES THEY CAN'T FIGURE out how a plane stays in the air DESPITE THEIR SCIENTIFIC "FACTS" THEY HIDE BEHIND!)HA! WELL DONE ONCE AGAIN, OLD MAN!!!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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heartfelt via the soul and then elegantly presented through your creative consciousness .....this consciousness is proof of the Creator, because consciousness can PERCEIVE OF a creator-If said consciousness can ALSO THINK and FEEL the Creator, then TOTAL LIFE EXPERIENCE of the CREATOR ....IS the "proof" Any physical "scientific proof" at this point would be subject to ONLY THE "LAWS" AS WE ARE CURRENTLY AWARE OF-THEREFORE, SCIENTIFIC ANALYSIS IS FLAWED.(EX:SCIENCE SECRETLY STATES THEY CAN'T FIGURE out how a plane stays in the air DESPITE THEIR SCIENTIFIC "FACTS" THEY HIDE BEHIND!)HA! WELL DONE ONCE AGAIN, OLD MAN!!!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Dear Val: this is the third time I have replied to your great review so I hope at least one gets through. Your comments are always a gift and always joyfully received with great thanks! Vance
Comment from Irish Rain
No...God has no need to ever defend His existence...the more evidence that 'there is no God'...the more evidence there is. I read a chapter a night of my Bible...and prophecies are most certainly coming true...your poem of faith is beautiful, may it be the light someone needs right now. Blessings tonight...Judy
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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No...God has no need to ever defend His existence...the more evidence that 'there is no God'...the more evidence there is. I read a chapter a night of my Bible...and prophecies are most certainly coming true...your poem of faith is beautiful, may it be the light someone needs right now. Blessings tonight...Judy
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much Judy, I really appreciate your encouragements and I hope as well that this work may light up someone's life. It was my prayer that it would! Blessings! Vance
Comment from michaelcahill
WOW. This is wonderful. It sings with Faith and praise. It does sound like your prayers were answered in a strong and sure voice. Very uplifting and penned so beautifully. A Poem of the Month here perhaps. mikey
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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WOW. This is wonderful. It sings with Faith and praise. It does sound like your prayers were answered in a strong and sure voice. Very uplifting and penned so beautifully. A Poem of the Month here perhaps. mikey
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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/Dear mikey: thanks for your great review and I hope this is a gift to someone out there who needs it as much as I needed to send it! Blessings, Vance
Comment from GWinterwin
What a super poem with a beautiful picture. Your word flow and rhyming make it easy to read and understand. Great is your witness in speaking the truth about our creator. I hope many read this poem, because it has such a marvelous message.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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What a super poem with a beautiful picture. Your word flow and rhyming make it easy to read and understand. Great is your witness in speaking the truth about our creator. I hope many read this poem, because it has such a marvelous message.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Der GWinterwin: thanks so much for your generous rating and wonderful comments. I really, sincerely appreciate you kind thoughts. Vance
Comment from Tegan1311
This is a very well written poem. I applaud the fact that you wrote this poem from what God's perspective might be. Love that you took a chance with that. Your words flow well, your descriptions well done.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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This is a very well written poem. I applaud the fact that you wrote this poem from what God's perspective might be. Love that you took a chance with that. Your words flow well, your descriptions well done.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Thanks Tegan1311...I'm glad to meet you and hope to see you again soon..I really appreciate your kind review! HIS GRAYNESS Vance