haiku(tree dwelling lizard)
an Australian lizard3 total reviews
Comment from rrabinow
I enjoyed reading your haiku. Great use of description in your poem. Good job with the syllable count. Great picture choice. Best of luck,
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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I enjoyed reading your haiku. Great use of description in your poem. Good job with the syllable count. Great picture choice. Best of luck,
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Domino 2
Blimey - he's a scary critter, but at least he hasn't got any teeth. :-)
Original and effective to have your satori as the first line.
Nice one.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Blimey - he's a scary critter, but at least he hasn't got any teeth. :-)
Original and effective to have your satori as the first line.
Nice one.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from tfawcus
This accurate zoological observation cleverly links the idea that courtship and danger are one and the same thing in that both need us to raise the frill of our self-worth. Enemies and girlfriends both have to be shown how brave we are!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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This accurate zoological observation cleverly links the idea that courtship and danger are one and the same thing in that both need us to raise the frill of our self-worth. Enemies and girlfriends both have to be shown how brave we are!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Thank you