Don't Stop Me Now
200 words. Contest Entry47 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
Yikes how many Queen song titles can we use.???...I guess this is all part of doing the fandango ....and it must be how she OPERA-tes....
Good thing there's no Mama....I killed a man.....maybe that would be the next installment....
God bless
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Yikes how many Queen song titles can we use.???...I guess this is all part of doing the fandango ....and it must be how she OPERA-tes....
Good thing there's no Mama....I killed a man.....maybe that would be the next installment....
God bless
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Yikes. Thanks for the awesome review.
Comment from Rmocruz
Fat bottomed girl is a real bitch, no wonder Fred was gay.
I like the way you cleverly infused the song titles into the dialogue.
A very entertaining prompt entry.
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Fat bottomed girl is a real bitch, no wonder Fred was gay.
I like the way you cleverly infused the song titles into the dialogue.
A very entertaining prompt entry.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the excellent review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Linda England Bonam
This was written very well, and I see nothing that needs correcting! Good job, and this should be a good entry for the contest!
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This was written very well, and I see nothing that needs correcting! Good job, and this should be a good entry for the contest!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the great review!
Comment from Cajungirl
I must say I enjoyed the read. Very well-written and I loved the fact that you managed to used all of the titles in your story. The story flowed very well none of the titled seemed to be forced in the story. Great job.,
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I must say I enjoyed the read. Very well-written and I loved the fact that you managed to used all of the titles in your story. The story flowed very well none of the titled seemed to be forced in the story. Great job.,
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from James Dooney
Because you're having a good time ! I know this song ! You did a very good write up for it here. Well done and good luck in the comp !
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Because you're having a good time ! I know this song ! You did a very good write up for it here. Well done and good luck in the comp !
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
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Yup. Thanks for the great review!
Comment from dennis0530
Ingenious and very imaginative.
Stringing all the titles to make this story calls for creativity.
Starting with "Don't Stop me now" is a very appropriate beginning and "Another one bites the dust" displays a finality in the ending.
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Ingenious and very imaginative.
Stringing all the titles to make this story calls for creativity.
Starting with "Don't Stop me now" is a very appropriate beginning and "Another one bites the dust" displays a finality in the ending.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
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Awesome. Thank you for the excellent review.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Well, a creative way to use up Queen's lines...and well a very real way to portray the story in 200 words.
You created a whole picture and a complete short.
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Hi. Well, a creative way to use up Queen's lines...and well a very real way to portray the story in 200 words.
You created a whole picture and a complete short.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the great review. It is much appreciated. Have a great day!
Comment from chasennov
Don't Stop Me Now" I was still trying to enjoy the story, and then it was all over. But, what else can one expect from a 200 word story. Well done.
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Don't Stop Me Now" I was still trying to enjoy the story, and then it was all over. But, what else can one expect from a 200 word story. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the great review!
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Jackarrie
you certainly went above and beyond the contest. a very was creative write, and you used all the prompts for your entry. What a clever entry.
Good luck
Mary
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you certainly went above and beyond the contest. a very was creative write, and you used all the prompts for your entry. What a clever entry.
Good luck
Mary
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review. It is much appreciated.
Comment from Sanku
you have managed to incorporate all the prompts in the different stages of the story's development .that was very clever .the lady is smart .The next John too may end up the same way.tyrone sure watches out for her.very smooth flow and it made very entertaining reading.
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you have managed to incorporate all the prompts in the different stages of the story's development .that was very clever .the lady is smart .The next John too may end up the same way.tyrone sure watches out for her.very smooth flow and it made very entertaining reading.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.