Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

Amusing read Carolyn. I can imagine your grandchildren love it when you write like this. Good rhyme used to keep the poem flowing well. Nicely done!

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

Thanks Sarah, yes they do love it when I read to them, especially when it is something I wrote. In fact, several of them are great little writers themselves.
So glad you enjoyed this one, it was such fun to write.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from lynglyng

Exceptional

This poem is so cute. It made me smile. You have a gift for encouraging and lifting people's spirits. Please keep writing!

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

Smilin' at you, thank you for your fine words and shining stars. I am really happy you enjoyed this one.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Easy to see why children would love this, especially if coupled with pictures. Good format with both sides of the coin and you could say how much money just two feet saves. :-)

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

That's right.. A shoe shopping spree for a centipede could break the bank.. Thanks Shari, :-) Carolyn

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

I Love this Carolyn, and understand why your kids love your kid poem...and hey...shoes aren't cheap these days...LOL...this is so cute...and I love this picture...so very well thought of...and very well written...cuteeeeee...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

LOL, I enjoyed your review. That would be quite a shopping spree wouldn't it? Thank you so much.
Love you.. Carolyn

reply by l.raven on 07-Jan-2015

yes it would...like when my mother took all six of us kids shoes shopping...LOL...love you too...so welcome...xxoo

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015

I don't remember having new shoes actually, until I was a teenager. We always wore what the older ones outgrew. Since there were 10 of us, I was just always glad they were in 'pretty' good shape. LOL...LOve and goodnight, Carolyn

reply by l.raven on 09-Jan-2015

OH may gosh...but those were the good ole days...smiling...xxoo

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is yet another interesting addition to the story that the author has created with this piece of work. This is a very nice poem and lots if fun. Well done yet again.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thanks Tom, I so enjoyed writing this one and happy you liked it. :-) Carolyn

reply by Tomes Johnston on 07-Jan-2015

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reply by Tomes Johnston on 07-Jan-2015

I did.

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Carolyn, Brooke is not the only one that can have fun writing children's writes that secretly adults love. LOL. Nice rhyme and creativity. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thanks for the great comments. I love variety and children's stories and poems are among my favorite to write.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from CHIGYSISKI

Excellent

Nice poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. This was my favorite stanza:

And then I'd have some house slippers
To keep my feet all cozy
And socks on every foot I'd wear
No matter where I mozie

I like the ingenious rhyming of cozy and mozie although am not sure what mozie means.

Anuli

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Hi there, mozie just means to kind of nonchalantly amble along.. Walk rather slowly.. Come to think of it, I mozie along myself at times. LOL
Thank you so much and I am delighted you enjoyed this little poem. :-) Carolyn

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the picture that you post
I thought it was a perfect make for all those silly things you wrote.
I read it to my great-grand children they all began to laugh.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Oh misscookie, that is wonderful that the poem made your little grandchildren laugh. I am so glad. Thanks for sharing that with me.. :-) Carolyn

reply by misscookie on 09-Jan-2015

you're very welcome. Have a blessed weekend.
Cookie

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This poem just made me laugh. Just one thing, the line 'A human kid and not a centipede ' seems a bit awkward. 'A human kid with only two feet' or something like that would sound better. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thanks John, I may change that to 'a kid and not a centipede.' I appreciate that you enjoyed this one and the comments. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

great children's poem

your words allow the reader to see and feel you are blessed for who you are and two feet is all you need

good imagery through out allows one to connect

good enjambment to allow flow through sentences

good rhyme through out verses

cheers Smoothiecool ...SC <:> Faye

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thanks for the wonderful review. So glad you liked 'I'm glad I'm not a Centipede.'... :-) Carolyn

reply by Smoothiecool on 07-Jan-2015

OH just think of the expense in shoes LOL
welcome to review .....SC <:> Faye (*:*)