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Comment from Pantygynt
Left? Right? And the picture shows a circle. I've often thought that the political continuum is actually a circle and if you go far enough in either direction you meet at the bottom, the pits, totalitarianism. So whether you read your poem from the top down or the bottom up you still endup going round in circles, right?
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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Left? Right? And the picture shows a circle. I've often thought that the political continuum is actually a circle and if you go far enough in either direction you meet at the bottom, the pits, totalitarianism. So whether you read your poem from the top down or the bottom up you still endup going round in circles, right?
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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Thanks for reviewing, Pantygynt. You're right.
Comment from Healing
Quite intriguing. You make a very valid point with this short poem.
Very nice poem.
Well written with a great flow.
Very easy and enjoyable to read for sure.
This writing has so much meaning behind the words. Great stuff.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
KY
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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Quite intriguing. You make a very valid point with this short poem.
Very nice poem.
Well written with a great flow.
Very easy and enjoyable to read for sure.
This writing has so much meaning behind the words. Great stuff.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
KY
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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Thank you, KY, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Mary H-W
Good Antonym Poem. I think it's meaning could be taken different ways. For me the accompanying picture implies the end of the world, perhaps by natural disaster, and none of us were ready. (Or it could be much less ominous, with everyone turning the wrong way and being left by a bus-driver). I like the placing of the word 'wrong' as it is also an antonym of right.
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Good Antonym Poem. I think it's meaning could be taken different ways. For me the accompanying picture implies the end of the world, perhaps by natural disaster, and none of us were ready. (Or it could be much less ominous, with everyone turning the wrong way and being left by a bus-driver). I like the placing of the word 'wrong' as it is also an antonym of right.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from patcelaw
Rather profound thought. Good luck in the contest. may your weekend be wonder filled and blessed, I enjoyed this read, Patricia
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Rather profound thought. Good luck in the contest. may your weekend be wonder filled and blessed, I enjoyed this read, Patricia
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Thank you, Patricia, for taking a look at this. Bill
Comment from mfowler
This poem uses the antonyms perfectly to juxtapose (using puns) an open ended question that stimulates thought. It could mean something political such as 'would there be any survivors after a nuclear war caused by bad decisions by national leaders?' But, it could mean anything. Top chance in this comp. best of luck.
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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This poem uses the antonyms perfectly to juxtapose (using puns) an open ended question that stimulates thought. It could mean something political such as 'would there be any survivors after a nuclear war caused by bad decisions by national leaders?' But, it could mean anything. Top chance in this comp. best of luck.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the start. First was the artwork you choose for your poem, which is a perfect match.
This what I call a food for thought poem....meaning after you read it you go mm
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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You captured my attention from the start. First was the artwork you choose for your poem, which is a perfect match.
This what I call a food for thought poem....meaning after you read it you go mm
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Thank you, Cookie, for the excellent review.
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You are very welcome, until next time
Cookie
Comment from I am Cat
ooooo.... If I had a six, I would give it to YOU
this is exactly what they're looking for in this contest, i"m sure of it.
Well said, well written.
Well done.
I loved it.
I, myself, though not really religious, can definitely stop and think on this one...
I like it.
I hope you win!
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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ooooo.... If I had a six, I would give it to YOU
this is exactly what they're looking for in this contest, i"m sure of it.
Well said, well written.
Well done.
I loved it.
I, myself, though not really religious, can definitely stop and think on this one...
I like it.
I hope you win!
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Thank you, IAC, for the promissory six.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi....
Good play on words. Creative, and a good entry. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Hi....
Good play on words. Creative, and a good entry. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 08-May-2015
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Thank you, Jax, for the kind review.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hey Bill,
great construction and very lingering thoughts in this antonym poem... pretty damn scary just hanging around pondering your words... don't know if that's a good sign of the quality of your poem or just the form of your intent? Hmmmmmmm, no it's the quality... smile))))))))))... well done and all the best in the contest... a real contender... that's if anyone is left... right?
With our thoughts we create,
a grim view,
James.
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Hey Bill,
great construction and very lingering thoughts in this antonym poem... pretty damn scary just hanging around pondering your words... don't know if that's a good sign of the quality of your poem or just the form of your intent? Hmmmmmmm, no it's the quality... smile))))))))))... well done and all the best in the contest... a real contender... that's if anyone is left... right?
With our thoughts we create,
a grim view,
James.
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Thank you, James, for the kind review.
Comment from fossilhunter
Ingenious expression in a short verse
Great thought process
This was a difficult assignment, but you made it seem easy.
That is good writing. You have my vote.
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Ingenious expression in a short verse
Great thought process
This was a difficult assignment, but you made it seem easy.
That is good writing. You have my vote.
Comment Written 07-May-2015
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Thank you, FH, for the outstanding review.