Comment from LeslieP5

Excellent

Great one, very good theme - got a laugh. Ants are crawling up your pants - what else could you do but dance! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for your review and best wishes. At the last minute a reviewer let me know that my poem did not follow the requirements as the three line must rhyme. Had to completely removed my original poem ( a spiritual one) thus this is what I came up with. I am so glad that this made you laugh. Blessings................................

reply by LeslieP5 on 04-Sep-2015

You're welcome. I see you are at the top of the list and at this point have chance at winning the contest.

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Humorous in its appeal writer in this work illustrates descriptive items for this stir. A pleasing conveyance.

Thought:

Ants
crawling up legs and pants
dance

Solely my view.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for your very kind review. Blessings.................................

Comment from anabellapongasi

Excellent

Hi there,
This is a lovely statement written in 1-6-1 format. However, I'm afraid you missed the rhyme requirement.
faith
will define your belief
trust
Blessings,
Anabella

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for your review, I really must make sure I read all the requirements next time, no excuse for not seeing that rhyming was required. Time is running out so I couldn't make this work so I posted one that rhymes so I wouldn't get disqualified. Thanks so much for the heads up. I am not pleased with what I just posted, but I never win.

reply by anabellapongasi on 04-Sep-2015

You're welcome:)....
well that's a nice humor piece now :) and the picture is a perfect match. .who knows? sometimes voters prefer stuff that make them laugh or smile. so it's all in their hands now. Best of luck!

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Hello mystery poet,

Okay - you have the required syllabic count in each line. :)

Faith and trust ... they go hand in hand. You made me pause and ponder. Can faith exist without trust - and vice versa?

I have to think some more ... :)

Best wishes for the contest.

Sonali

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for your review, I had to completely redo this poem as the three lines must rhyme. I barely met the deadline, had to go a completely different route. Thanks for giving me your kind review. Blessings............................