Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Nice message here with your poem dedicated to the love of God. I'm still finding trouble as to find the two way synergy of love from him. So we kneel, then what? Sorry, I guess I just wanted to hear in the poem, a response back from him in your poem. Good luck.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015

Thanks so much my friend for your review and best wishes. Blessings...................

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

hey mystery writer.. i have to point out that NO POSSESSIVE APOSTROPHES ARE ALLOWED. you have one in the first haiku. please fix it so you won't be disqualifed.

rebekka x

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015

Thanks so much my friend for your review and the heads up, I am very grateful for your kindness. Blessings..................

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

your poem has a great message...a true message...we will all kneel in His presents when He arrives...and all evil will be gone...very well written...luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings....................................

reply by l.raven on 08-Sep-2015

you are so welcome...and Blessings to you as well...xxoo luff

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I love the three different satori lines with use of Spiritual wording, I wish you the best of luck in the contest

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings.....................................