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Epidemic Rages

contest entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
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Your soo right about this one..It's a social disease that has served as a deconditioning for the masses because, they are afraid to look at people. They rather look at their phone pretending to call for help if someone is in trouble. Hopefully, one day, the phones will just turn off. Then what? I loved your poem. I suspect a strong contest entry here. Cheers.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
    I totally agree with your editorial. Thanks so much for sharing my senyru.
Comment from Eric1
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Hi Mystery author, this is a beautifully written entry for this particular competition, This is one of those that I wish I had written,so clever and so current, I wish you the best of luck in this competition my friend.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
    Eric, you are very kind and I am flattered. Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by Eric1 on 10-Sep-2015
    You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
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My but isn't that the truth. I am so glad I don't own one of those objects. I keep telling my boys that they will have arthritis in their thumbs before their 40. Sad. I loved your senryu. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
    Thank you for sharing and reviewing my poem.
reply by The Mom/DarleneThomson on 10-Sep-2015
    your welcome