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cheek, tongue, in - please rearrange22 total reviews
Comment from I am Cat
There... this is better. I only changed one letter. ;)
LOL
World-wi(d)e, women wince when weary men whine.
or... not changing any letters...
World-wise women wince, when weary men whine.
LOLOL
I like it much better. ;)
bwahahahahaha
Congrats on your reviewing contest third place! Very well done! ;)
I always enjoy your reviews.
Cat
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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There... this is better. I only changed one letter. ;)
LOL
World-wi(d)e, women wince when weary men whine.
or... not changing any letters...
World-wise women wince, when weary men whine.
LOLOL
I like it much better. ;)
bwahahahahaha
Congrats on your reviewing contest third place! Very well done! ;)
I always enjoy your reviews.
Cat
Comment Written 02-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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Many thanks Cat. Much appreciated. I like reviewing, but writing is better! G
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Indeed it is!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good quote you have penned. I wish I had six more stars to give you but I don't. I guess I read it with my husband in mind lol He is a very patient man. lol Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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This is a very good quote you have penned. I wish I had six more stars to give you but I don't. I guess I read it with my husband in mind lol He is a very patient man. lol Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 01-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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Many thanks for the great feedback. much appreciated.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello giraffmang, Very witty, memorable with ease. Regarding the re-arranging of words, I wouldn't re-arrange any of the words, but perhaps omit "world weary." It gets to be a bit of a tongue twister, so it would read:
When women whine, wise-men wince or, suggestion, worldly men wince? So far, I like your quote the best, and for the reasons given above. I feel you have fully met and complied with contest rules and the objective.)
Overall, a fun and memorable quote. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
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Hello giraffmang, Very witty, memorable with ease. Regarding the re-arranging of words, I wouldn't re-arrange any of the words, but perhaps omit "world weary." It gets to be a bit of a tongue twister, so it would read:
When women whine, wise-men wince or, suggestion, worldly men wince? So far, I like your quote the best, and for the reasons given above. I feel you have fully met and complied with contest rules and the objective.)
Overall, a fun and memorable quote. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 30-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
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Many thanks for the great review. I'll have a look again later. GMG
Comment from XGoneX
Hello,
Sorry it took me a while to check your work.
This was a fun entry and I liked the alliteration. Actually when it comes to poetry, even though this is a quote and not poetry, I like alliteration a lot. It's a difficult prompt, though.
Jade x
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
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Hello,
Sorry it took me a while to check your work.
This was a fun entry and I liked the alliteration. Actually when it comes to poetry, even though this is a quote and not poetry, I like alliteration a lot. It's a difficult prompt, though.
Jade x
Comment Written 30-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
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Many thanks for dropping in on this. It's just a bit of fun. GMG
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
Funny quote about women, but maybe a little stereotype-not really, it's funny. The only thing I would say is that it is too long and people may not remember it after a while.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
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Hello :)
Funny quote about women, but maybe a little stereotype-not really, it's funny. The only thing I would say is that it is too long and people may not remember it after a while.
Gypsy
Comment Written 30-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
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Many thanks. I like to give people some level of credit and assume they can remember 8 words! LOL
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I agree but I meant it is not a catchy quote.
Comment from jpduck
Apologies for the lateness and the brevity of this review; I have been away for a week's writers' tutored retreat in very rural Devon. It was outstandingly good. I fear I have returned to discover 45 FS messages waiting.
I thought this was both clever and true. I think we can overlook the mild cheat of hyphenating wise men. Best of luck with the contest.
Adrian
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
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Apologies for the lateness and the brevity of this review; I have been away for a week's writers' tutored retreat in very rural Devon. It was outstandingly good. I fear I have returned to discover 45 FS messages waiting.
I thought this was both clever and true. I think we can overlook the mild cheat of hyphenating wise men. Best of luck with the contest.
Adrian
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
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Many thanks, Adrian. I hope the course went very well. Was it Arvon? I hear they are supposed to be very good. G
Comment from Ulla
Hi G, you can't be serious on this one, are you? Never heard that women whine before. Smile:) You're being sexist, but that's intentional of course, and the dare. Although I'm a woman I tend to agree with you in this well phrased quote. I quite like it. I should have come up with a quote about the grumpy man. Just to make the balance right. He, he. All best in the contest. I'm going to see how many votes you get on this one. All the best. Ulla
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Hi G, you can't be serious on this one, are you? Never heard that women whine before. Smile:) You're being sexist, but that's intentional of course, and the dare. Although I'm a woman I tend to agree with you in this well phrased quote. I quite like it. I should have come up with a quote about the grumpy man. Just to make the balance right. He, he. All best in the contest. I'm going to see how many votes you get on this one. All the best. Ulla
Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Ha ha. Many thanks Ulla, I'm going for the male vote here! Watch this space.
G
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G, that's your only chance. LOL
Comment from Bill Schott
"When women whine world-weary wise men wince" I needed to write it down to begin my rote memorization. When do world-weary wise men wince? When women whine. Whiney women seems redundant. Love your quote.Kidding about women.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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"When women whine world-weary wise men wince" I needed to write it down to begin my rote memorization. When do world-weary wise men wince? When women whine. Whiney women seems redundant. Love your quote.Kidding about women.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Many thanks for the great response to this one, Bill. Cheers. G
Comment from mauial
Love this alliterative quote. I think that this is the best of the lot so far as the words flow so easily together to make a point. None of the words seem to be forced in at all.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Love this alliterative quote. I think that this is the best of the lot so far as the words flow so easily together to make a point. None of the words seem to be forced in at all.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Many thanks for the great feedback in this one.
Comment from Tuck
You misogynist, sexist creep! I love this, but then I'm a guy. You realize this has zero chance of winning, despite being really, really good ... and memorable.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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You misogynist, sexist creep! I love this, but then I'm a guy. You realize this has zero chance of winning, despite being really, really good ... and memorable.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Yeah, I know the chances are less than zero! but it was fun to do! Much appreciated.