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the nature of God's work

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Comment from angel123
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I enjoyed reading your spiritual nature poem. It flows well and good alliteration of words God's great glory. Your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts.

Angel123

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments they are greatly appreciated. Blessings..................Portia
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your nature haiku. Good job on the format. I like the alliteration of [g]. Your presentation is super--the colors, the art, & the message. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
    Jan,

    Thanks so much for your review , very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings .......Portia
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Portia,
I love lightening shows. I do think they show God's glory. When my son was young I used to tell him God was pointing out things that He wanted us to see. Sometimes it was a building, a tree, the ocean, but it was always changing. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
    Darlene,

    Thanks so much my dear friend for your very kind review , six star rating and best wishes.

    Sending love your way!!!!! Portia
Comment from janalma
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Only about three of these haiku are truly haiku. At least according to what I've learned. Yours is actually the only one that seems to follow all the haiku guidelines. I think one of these rules is that the title is the first line of the poem. No? This one carries an uplifting message as well as being about nature. Nice one.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
    Janalma,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings..................Portia
Comment from AJGOLD
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I had trouble with the third line. To me, God's greatness warrants more than "brighter days ahead"

I suggest _______ ______ lies ahead.

The blanks could be "his love" or "love, peace" etc.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
    Thanks so much for your review, comments and suggestions they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....................Portia