Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Ah even if I'm old I still desire to play after I saw your fun party friends waiting .

Thank you Bill for putting a clown smile on my face.

Gert

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2016

Thank you, Gert, for reviewing this. Bill

reply by Gert sherwood on 20-Jan-2016

Hi, You are welcome Bill
Gert

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

Oh, your friends do look like fun. It is important to stay young and having such friends is certainly one way to do it. You create delightful images with your verse and have chosen the perfect artwork to get your theme across.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016

Thank you, w.j., for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from a.w.brooks

Excellent

Nice one I like the art work and you know kids they love to play, Nothing to be suggested on this thanks for the read and Happy writing.

A.W.Brooks

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016

Thank you, a.w., for the positive review. Bill

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

I'm sorry. I think your poem is wonderful, Bill, and I might be misinterpreting, but I don't think I am. That's one of the hardships we face as we grow older, or when we have survived service to our country and others have not. God bless you.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016

Thank you, Dawn, for the excellent review. Bill

reply by Dawn Munro on 18-Jan-2016

You're most welcome.

Comment from P1

Excellent

aw this was so short and so poignent
i took from it that all our friends from
childhood will be waiting for us when we
meet them again. made me sad and yet happy
made me think

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016

Thank you, Paige, for the excellent review. Bill