Love Binds All--Hate Destroys
Double Acrostic/Cleave-Contest Entry26 total reviews
Comment from Melbelles
Great poem! I like how you use the spacing and gaps. I do that too. It fits well, as if it gives split seconds to think between the lines. Very creative with the red and blue words, like each side. It all adds to the drama.
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Great poem! I like how you use the spacing and gaps. I do that too. It fits well, as if it gives split seconds to think between the lines. Very creative with the red and blue words, like each side. It all adds to the drama.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Great Poem. We all have two natures. We are Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. But I love the words" underneath all of this I feel fear, unleash faith within, love is near." Faith is always within our hearts. Great.
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Great Poem. We all have two natures. We are Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. But I love the words" underneath all of this I feel fear, unleash faith within, love is near." Faith is always within our hearts. Great.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
Comment from Stephanie Joulin
This is amazing. This is the first time i have seen this style of writing and I absolutely love it. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. I am not religious, I am spiritual; I did not detect any specific religion in this text.
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This is amazing. This is the first time i have seen this style of writing and I absolutely love it. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. I am not religious, I am spiritual; I did not detect any specific religion in this text.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
Comment from maccapool34
Bravo....I read the poem the first time together and enjoyed the rhyme sense to it. However am new to that acrostic technique but found the style very interesting and particularly the cross over from negative thinking to positive thinking by the nature of God. A touching sentiment..... excellent job!
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Bravo....I read the poem the first time together and enjoyed the rhyme sense to it. However am new to that acrostic technique but found the style very interesting and particularly the cross over from negative thinking to positive thinking by the nature of God. A touching sentiment..... excellent job!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
Comment from gudbjorg
This is a beautiful poem with a very good message that brings out the human side of things vs how God sees things. The poem is very well composed and is very impressive. The contrast in the colours compliment the poem. A great poem where the light of God destroys the darkness. "Nothing left but to bow down and pray." I like to say: "Prayer is powerful and when we pray things will happen and things will be done. God answers our prayers." Well done.
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This is a beautiful poem with a very good message that brings out the human side of things vs how God sees things. The poem is very well composed and is very impressive. The contrast in the colours compliment the poem. A great poem where the light of God destroys the darkness. "Nothing left but to bow down and pray." I like to say: "Prayer is powerful and when we pray things will happen and things will be done. God answers our prayers." Well done.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2018
Comment from Honey Bee Jean
So beautifully composed! I love the way darkness is portayed here. Almost as if to say that the darkness is required in order for the light to exist. "Only what lies inside climbs the ladder" such a captivating line. Thank you for sharing!
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So beautifully composed! I love the way darkness is portayed here. Almost as if to say that the darkness is required in order for the light to exist. "Only what lies inside climbs the ladder" such a captivating line. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
Comment from Teri7
Michael, This is a very beautiful double acrostic poem you have penned for the contest. You used exceptional wording and great imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Am going to book case this! Blessings, Teri
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Michael, This is a very beautiful double acrostic poem you have penned for the contest. You used exceptional wording and great imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Am going to book case this! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
Comment from Ric Myworld
I don't give many of my measly stash of sixes for poetry of any kind except for the few that I just can't hold back from. I definitely don't know why or the particulars of any form of poetry, but I'm not so dumb that I can't give praise to those that smack me upside my silly head or ring melodious in my nearly deafened ears. Thanks for sharing another of your fine poems, and good luck in the contest. :-)
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I don't give many of my measly stash of sixes for poetry of any kind except for the few that I just can't hold back from. I definitely don't know why or the particulars of any form of poetry, but I'm not so dumb that I can't give praise to those that smack me upside my silly head or ring melodious in my nearly deafened ears. Thanks for sharing another of your fine poems, and good luck in the contest. :-)
Comment Written 03-Oct-2016
Comment from Ima L. Ami
This is one of the most beautiful religious poems I have ever read! I love how the two can be read individually or combined. This truly reflects the relationship between God and Man. Apart, they are both strong, but together, abslolutely amazing!!! I don't give six stars often, but this is deserving of ten! Great work, Mikey :)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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This is one of the most beautiful religious poems I have ever read! I love how the two can be read individually or combined. This truly reflects the relationship between God and Man. Apart, they are both strong, but together, abslolutely amazing!!! I don't give six stars often, but this is deserving of ten! Great work, Mikey :)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Gee. I'm really stunned by your response, Suzanne. I'm delighted you enjoyed this as I did spend a lot of time with it and was hoping it might resonate with a few people. I couldn't be happier that you are one of them as I admire your skills and keen intellect. Thanks a million. Big smiles. :)) mikey
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Rubylou
Wow!
Your determination and hard work is certainly evident in this magnificent piece.
I have to say the cleave poem is a new concept for me.
What a great model to read and learn from.
I like the weaving of the two colors. They lend to two separate thoughts when reading them individually
Also they don't distract when reading as one poem.
Yours is a strong message and to my thinking, applicable to all.
Great job, Mikey
Rubylou
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
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Wow!
Your determination and hard work is certainly evident in this magnificent piece.
I have to say the cleave poem is a new concept for me.
What a great model to read and learn from.
I like the weaving of the two colors. They lend to two separate thoughts when reading them individually
Also they don't distract when reading as one poem.
Yours is a strong message and to my thinking, applicable to all.
Great job, Mikey
Rubylou
Comment Written 04-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
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Wow. I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this so much. I was hoping the colours and all would make it easier to separate the two pieces. The font had to be so small because of the new format. So glad you could read it and more delighted you understood and liked it. Thanks soooo much. I can't stop smiling. mikey