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Key FarGo - Nanny Diaries

A Day in the Life

19 total reviews 
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Okay, now I am REALLY p/o'd - I READ this! Where's the review??? I LOVED it! I six-starred it, at least I could have SWORN I did! Well, too late now for a six to do any good, but I am seriously disappointed (or maybe I m seriously deluded ?? - read it in its entirety and then didn't review?) Nope. I'm pretty darn sure I sixed it! I sure as hell didn't forget the story - I even remember the only critique I had - "nappy", as in "nap", brings to mind a diaper, not sleep...

Oh dear...

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
    You probably confused it with the Nashville Trashville ending, my guess...I seem to have an issue with being locked out of things...hotel rooms, cars... I appreciate your RR&R as always, and input. I am way behind due to the holiday, so playing catch-up now...thank you, Dawn.
reply by Dawn Munro on 28-Nov-2016
    No - I didn't confuse it. I'm actually surprised that you would think my reading comprehension so bad!!! I wasn't REALLY p/o'd - just mildly annoyed that I didn't see my review. But reviews HAVE disappeared on here, more than once. if I could remember the name of the member who lost DOZENS at once...but as usual, the name is lost in the banks of fog that envelop past (and therefore, insignificant) details...sigh...

    No Mary - unless it was years prior, I wouldn't forget or confuse something like two stories vastly different. Believe me.
Comment from LaRosa
Exceptional
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The author has a unique and vibrant ability to place the reader in the mind of the 'heroine'. Her concepts of looking at life are new and fresh.

"When the universe deals you a challenge, take pictures."
"I arrived late due to my clove essential oil bottle breaking and making a mess"
"...smelling like I had crushed 900 nuts of Meg with my bare hands."
Even a simple, ordinary seat belt becomes a 'standard one point harnessing seatbelt."

I find myself thinking of Brunhilda a lot these days....

Enjoyed reading this little vignette, as usual.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
    What a wonderful review you have given me, LaRosa. I am humbled by your words and thank you from the bottom of my heart. I appreciate your continued interest and follow, most especially. Have a wonderful week.

reply by LaRosa on 28-Nov-2016
    :)
Comment from Kelly2
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Mary....I'm starting to get used to your utterly insane life!


"My late-o-meter had another few minutes tacked on for this unexpected snag."

I'm sure you've by now figured out you need to add an extra half-hour (maybe more) to anything you do...


"A train conductor decided to mess with my "mojo" as he
exercised reverse and forward drills of the "choo-choo" back
and forth across the intersection."

Why DO they do this ONLY when you are running late?


"I greeted my friend while apologizing profusely for my lateness,
then began the pack mule phase required of toddlerism maintenence
by proceeding to unload:"

No kidding....did you ever even get to visit with your friend? Just going through my purse and pockets over and over and over makes me crazy.


"Note to Self: Don't place keys on the backseat arm rest during
extrication of child from his 5-point carseat, then engage
car lock function from same back door. Ever. Again."




"This MiMi was in need of a five-point nappy following that adventure."

Plus a little cocktail....:)

A story of "just another day" in the life of Mary. I was laughing at your crazy day all the way through!

You continue to amuse me!

Kelly

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
    :D, See, you didn't disappoint with another of your fabulous reviews! Thank you so much for the RR&R and always uplifting editorials. Seriously, your reviews should be considered a legitimate posting. I appreciate you Ms. Kelly...have a terrific week! I'm still playing catch up!
Comment from Spitfire
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You certainly have a talent for humorous writing. Lost glasses are my bugaboo. I have only one set of car keys too and thus a fear of locking myself out if I forget to remove them. Here's a tip that works. Next time you lose something, say 'reach' and forget about it. Unless you threw the item away or it was stolen, said article will be found in a matter of minutes. Don't know if it works to find toddlers. LOL

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
    I have never heard of that 'reach' strategy, but you can bet I am going to try it the next time I lose something :D St. Anthony is my go to and he never lets me down, either. So far, I've not lost a toddler, so let's hope that streak continues with another baby due in May! Thank you for your RR&R. Much appreciated! Have a great week. Shari.
reply by Spitfire on 28-Nov-2016
    Congratulations! How many children will that make?
Comment from emptypage
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Hahahaha...that kid was lucky I wasn't in charge. He'd have learned a whole new vocabulary, the pissy dance, and "How to Pull Your Hair Out in Public Without Caring" all in one day.

I hate keys. Really, I do.

Good stuff. You are lucky to have Kayla.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
    Happy Monday, Marla! Thank you for your RR&R and continued follow. So very appreciated! Yes, this was a day for the books and I was close to doing all of the above at one point in the fiasco. Why cars and fronts doors haven't excelled to retina identificiation is beyond me! Have a great week :)
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Yikes! I would have just gone home and cried all day. Talk about stressful "fun"... the only kind I know at my age. But you can handle it... I hope. :)

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016
    Hi Phyllis, thank you for the RR&R and yes, I thought about doing that a few times during the ordeal. Oh well, the show must go on! Have a great week!
Comment from barkingdog
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I can relate to several things, Mary.
I'm always 'losing' my keys, and I have no idea where the spare set has gone. Lost those for real. They'll be found when I'm dead and some has to go through all the possible places car keys hide.
Late is my middle name.
My dogs are confused but always happy to see me when I have to run back in the house for my purse, a sweater, the letter I was intending to mail, etc.

Great fun reading you.
Loved the cha-cha-cha dancing choo-choo.

:) e

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
    Hi Ellen, thank you so much for your great review and making me feel better about being a keyless loser :D Why does it always happen when one is in a hurry too?? I appreciate your kind comments and the time spent reading and reviewing this. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving!
Comment from Douglas Paul
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LOL - I think I have spent nearly half of my waking life looking for my car keys over the past few years. I can really relate to this one. Well done - fun read

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
    Hi Doug, thank you for your RR&R. You think they'd have come up with some sort of retina recognition entry by now! I appreciate your review. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving!
Comment from Sasha
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I just love Brunhilda...we all need one. I enjoyed this immensely and look forward to more you and Bruni's adventures. I went through a two-year period when I kept locking myself out of the car. I learned the hard way that AAA wouldn't come out after the third call, apparently that is all you are allowed. Found one sentence you may want to look at: leaving for the second time that morning....you said 'second time' in the previous sentence so you might want to change this to, 'again' or something similar.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
    Hi Sasha, Brunhilda is the real star and she knows it. She is getting a little heady with all the demands for Bruni! I did not know that about AAA and their three strikes and you're out clause. I will have to be extra careful. Is that per year? Thank you on the repetitive second...I have amended it and thank you for pointing that out to me, you were so right! Have a wonderful Thursday.
reply by Sasha on 24-Nov-2016
    I think it is per total membership...but not sure. The cur died shortly after and we never got AAA again.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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I can see my mother in almost every line of this story. I mean, of course, only that she looses her car keys more than anyone I've ever met. And it's usually while the car is running at a gas station, a restaurant, or even in her own driveway when she goes back in for something she forgot. Thanks for another fun and entertaining story. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
    Hi Ric, thank you for the wonderful review and I can relate to your mama! She must make you smile. I appreciate your continued interest in my work. Have a great Thanksgiving celebration!