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19 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
I loved this poem, Susan. It is so perfectly rhymed and the meter is wonderfully musical. I could find nothing at all I'd want to change. The rhymes seemed especially original and of course, the theme is universally appealing. It is an exceptional poem in every way. Loved it!!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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I loved this poem, Susan. It is so perfectly rhymed and the meter is wonderfully musical. I could find nothing at all I'd want to change. The rhymes seemed especially original and of course, the theme is universally appealing. It is an exceptional poem in every way. Loved it!!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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:-))))) 6 stars!!! Thank you so much!!! This means so much to me...especially coming from one of my favorite poets here!!
Comment from RGstar
This was so lovely. I didn't see this. Glad to see it now. Lovely write, dear author.
Deserves its place.
Best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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This was so lovely. I didn't see this. Glad to see it now. Lovely write, dear author.
Deserves its place.
Best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 03-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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hey you! Thank you so much for reading and for the review!! I DO appreciate YOU!!
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I appreciate you too dear author...
Best wishes.
Hope the sun shines where you are.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and creative poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Great job my friend! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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This is a very beautiful and creative poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Great job my friend! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you Teri for another wonderful review :-)
Comment from Mustang Patty
This poem has a very vivid and strong imagery. I couldn't help but think there is a pregnancy involved with the line, 'our passion's seed has found its need,
now sprouts in you and me.' Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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This poem has a very vivid and strong imagery. I couldn't help but think there is a pregnancy involved with the line, 'our passion's seed has found its need,
now sprouts in you and me.' Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Hi Patty, thank you for another wonderful review!
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hi, Susan,
I love your interior line rhymes in this splendid poem about the adoration of a mate. I appreciate the strong imagery you bring to the page with your thoughts of wild flowers gracing a warm flowing stream along with the reflective mood of the muse.
Your poem gave me a feeling of coming spring while your tender message left me with a sigh at the end.
Beautiful work, my friend...a pleasure to absorb!
Have a great day,
Bill
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Hi, Susan,
I love your interior line rhymes in this splendid poem about the adoration of a mate. I appreciate the strong imagery you bring to the page with your thoughts of wild flowers gracing a warm flowing stream along with the reflective mood of the muse.
Your poem gave me a feeling of coming spring while your tender message left me with a sigh at the end.
Beautiful work, my friend...a pleasure to absorb!
Have a great day,
Bill
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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A sigh?. :-)...love it! Thank you for such a wonderful review!!! I so do appreciate it! :-)
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Susan, this seems to me a very deep and most profound love poem. You are able with great talent to take the reader through some very thought provoking and intimate moments. Then, with a most gentle and subtle sway you bring the reader into your most poignant feelings displayed by a woman truly in love with once in a lifetime truest love.
I remember as a young boy taking those dandelions which has lost its color and life to blow those white petals across the landscape. So much fun then watching the gentle breeze having drift them away. Susan, thank you for this wonderful memory.
This poem really tugs at my heartstrings and my memory bank.
Take care my very talented friend,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Susan, this seems to me a very deep and most profound love poem. You are able with great talent to take the reader through some very thought provoking and intimate moments. Then, with a most gentle and subtle sway you bring the reader into your most poignant feelings displayed by a woman truly in love with once in a lifetime truest love.
I remember as a young boy taking those dandelions which has lost its color and life to blow those white petals across the landscape. So much fun then watching the gentle breeze having drift them away. Susan, thank you for this wonderful memory.
This poem really tugs at my heartstrings and my memory bank.
Take care my very talented friend,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thanks Jim...love your reviews!!
Comment from WalkerMan
This delightful, aptly illustrated, and splendidly penned poem expresses the narrator's heartfelt wish, via the air-scattered dandelion seeds, that the loving soulmate she has found will remain with her forever. The six perfect a-a,b,c-c,b quatrains and smoothly consistent meter are proof of impressive poetic skill, but the stirring way in which the well-chosen words are combined is what earned this post the sixth star. Any decent man to whom such a superb poem is addressed has to be thrilled to the core and bursting with love in response. Thank you for sharing this word-hug, and may everyone who sincerely makes this wish see it come true in all the best and most joyous ways.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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This delightful, aptly illustrated, and splendidly penned poem expresses the narrator's heartfelt wish, via the air-scattered dandelion seeds, that the loving soulmate she has found will remain with her forever. The six perfect a-a,b,c-c,b quatrains and smoothly consistent meter are proof of impressive poetic skill, but the stirring way in which the well-chosen words are combined is what earned this post the sixth star. Any decent man to whom such a superb poem is addressed has to be thrilled to the core and bursting with love in response. Thank you for sharing this word-hug, and may everyone who sincerely makes this wish see it come true in all the best and most joyous ways.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you mike, for yet another fantastic review.
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You are welcome, Susan. You earned it once again with another wondrous love poem. -- Mike
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your love poem "Dandelion Wishes. It rhymed well and you chose a lovely photo. I think every little girl has made a wish that way.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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I enjoyed reading your love poem "Dandelion Wishes. It rhymed well and you chose a lovely photo. I think every little girl has made a wish that way.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for the review, I do appreciate it!
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from dragonpoet
These simply rhymed abcb quatrains tells of another way to make a wish on something nature related. You can make a wish on a shooting star or on a dandelion. Sometimes even on the moon.
The speaker is one of the luck ones that has her wish come true and finds the love she is looking for.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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These simply rhymed abcb quatrains tells of another way to make a wish on something nature related. You can make a wish on a shooting star or on a dandelion. Sometimes even on the moon.
The speaker is one of the luck ones that has her wish come true and finds the love she is looking for.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for this awesome review!!!
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You are so very welcome.
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Comment from Dean Kuch
This entire poem is wonderfully well rendered and beautifully presented, Susan.
Of all of the exceptionally well-rhymed stanzas in this, the last two were my favorites:
They bare my dreams, this love it seems
Was truly meant to be --
Our tiny seed has found its need,
Now sprouts in you and me.
With gratitude, shall now conclude
my life's forever changed --
It's only you, pulling me through,
souls perfectly arranged....
Breathtaking...
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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This entire poem is wonderfully well rendered and beautifully presented, Susan.
Of all of the exceptionally well-rhymed stanzas in this, the last two were my favorites:
They bare my dreams, this love it seems
Was truly meant to be --
Our tiny seed has found its need,
Now sprouts in you and me.
With gratitude, shall now conclude
my life's forever changed --
It's only you, pulling me through,
souls perfectly arranged....
Breathtaking...
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Deono! I love this picture of you and gidget! get that creepy bony woman thingy ghost away from you!!!... Thanks for the awesome review dean..I soooo appreciate it!!!
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My pleasure, Susan. It's an outstanding poem.
Happy Monday,
~Dean
