Forever
My love for my deceased wife.2 total reviews
Comment from RodG
This is a lovely poem describing true love that lasts forever though one spouse has passed. I like how the Speaker refers to her as both "my darling" and "my love."
Rod
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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This is a lovely poem describing true love that lasts forever though one spouse has passed. I like how the Speaker refers to her as both "my darling" and "my love."
Rod
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thanks Rod for your kind review and stars.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a correct line and syllable count. You express the sentiments of lifelong commitment eloquently in this well penned piece. I applaud you for turning marriage into something more than " Til death do us part" by sustaining it into eternity and beyond. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a correct line and syllable count. You express the sentiments of lifelong commitment eloquently in this well penned piece. I applaud you for turning marriage into something more than " Til death do us part" by sustaining it into eternity and beyond. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your kind review and stars. I appreciate your sentiments.