Life Without....
contest entry12 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Nicely done poem which met the criterion well of writing without the "first letter." It reads a little like a kyrielle poem with the final line repeating. Glad we can have that first letter especially for grades in school!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Nicely done poem which met the criterion well of writing without the "first letter." It reads a little like a kyrielle poem with the final line repeating. Glad we can have that first letter especially for grades in school!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Ahhh Helen that was nice of you to say about the poem, thank you so much.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
What a great contest entry, 'without the first letter'. I love that repeating line. I really like your 2nd stanza. Perfect title 'without the first letter'.
Very best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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What a great contest entry, 'without the first letter'. I love that repeating line. I really like your 2nd stanza. Perfect title 'without the first letter'.
Very best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Thank you Gale for reviewing, your good luck wishes and kind comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-wreitten short poem to illustrate what life would be without the first letter of the alphabet who has already two 'a's in that one word. You made it through without it this time.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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A very well-wreitten short poem to illustrate what life would be without the first letter of the alphabet who has already two 'a's in that one word. You made it through without it this time.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank you Sandra for reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from barkingdog
This is a difficult prompt to follow, but you managed it well and gave us a bit of philosophy at the same time. Something IS lost without the first letter.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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This is a difficult prompt to follow, but you managed it well and gave us a bit of philosophy at the same time. Something IS lost without the first letter.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reviewing, your good luck wishes and your great comments.
Comment from Sugarray77
You did a good job in crafting this verse without the letter, "a". Your entry for this fun prompt is spot on and you achieved your goal here. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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You did a good job in crafting this verse without the letter, "a". Your entry for this fun prompt is spot on and you achieved your goal here. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reviewing, your good luck wishes and kind comments.
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh, good job with this wonderful piece. Where would we be without the letter "A?" Best of luck in the contest with this super entry. Crossing my fingers. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Oh, good job with this wonderful piece. Where would we be without the letter "A?" Best of luck in the contest with this super entry. Crossing my fingers. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank you Marilyn for reviewing, your good luck wishes, crossed fingers and great comments.
Comment from victor 66
You are so very right about the first letter of the alphabet not being in use in this particular poetic format. I think you have done a very good job following the rules in the prompt and not using the letter A. I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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You are so very right about the first letter of the alphabet not being in use in this particular poetic format. I think you have done a very good job following the rules in the prompt and not using the letter A. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reviewing, your good luck wishes and kind comments.
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You are most welcome, mystery writer.
Comment from DonandVicki
I read the story several time wondering about what the first letter was? Then "Duhhhh...." I looked into the contest rules and saw that you had to write a story without the letter "A". Very clever of you.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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I read the story several time wondering about what the first letter was? Then "Duhhhh...." I looked into the contest rules and saw that you had to write a story without the letter "A". Very clever of you.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reviewing and your great comments, glad it had you thinking.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Life with the letter 'A' appears terrible, full of misery, you think nothing is right, simplicity is lost, words just form without common sense to justify life, a peculiar state; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Life with the letter 'A' appears terrible, full of misery, you think nothing is right, simplicity is lost, words just form without common sense to justify life, a peculiar state; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from Alex Rosel
Hey, this piece of flash fiction is a nice take on the contest's remit. I think it should do well in the competition because it is addressing the issues of writing without using the letter "A" directly.
Well done, and good luck :)
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Hey, this piece of flash fiction is a nice take on the contest's remit. I think it should do well in the competition because it is addressing the issues of writing without using the letter "A" directly.
Well done, and good luck :)
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reviewing and your great comments.