Comment from
Agate Lucas
Very simple but your poem conveys a very powerful message too ! The image goes perfectly with it too. It reads as a sentence but the rhythm flows well, good job! Best wishes for the contest
Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
I truly appreciate your review, comments and best wishes!
Comment from
JLR
A charming photo illustration goes right to the heart of your 5-7-5. 17 syllables capture the essence of your message is are a delight to read and ponder. thank you for writing form your heart, write on and write often.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
Thank you for the review and comments. I am currently working on a rather lengthy poem, along with 2 lengthy pieces of prose.