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Prey

5-7-5 poem

5 total reviews 
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This 5-7-5 has a good relation between Nature and animal; the urban fox knows the art of preying and he is at the right time at the right place, walking for his tasty prey; well said, well done

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from kahpot
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What great artwork you chosen for this wonderful 5-7-5 poem, this is very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
    Thanks for the encouraging review zanya
Comment from RodG
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I have seen an urban fox in my front yard in the moonlight. Wondered then what prey it was after. Your 5-7-5 gives us a vivid snapshot of the animal. Rod

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
    Thanks for an encouraging review zanya
Comment from Kathleen S.
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I like it a lot. One it's unique. Two, there is actually a fox like that in my neighbor, that roams through our city streets. Bravo. It's very enjoyable to read. I love the picture you picked for your poetry.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
    Great review zanya
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is a striking little Haiku with an image to match. It is hard to believe that the beautiful creature pictured here is also a dangerous one. I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
    Yes indeed - thanks for reading zanya