Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Winnowing Winter Winds"Musings of an old man -2020
31 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I felt the windy breeze in these words but the poem has the feel of a free write rather than rhyming verse, maybe it's because there is no particular meter here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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I felt the windy breeze in these words but the poem has the feel of a free write rather than rhyming verse, maybe it's because there is no particular meter here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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My thought was to let the piece flow much like the winds, with no pattern.
Comment from patcelaw
This is such a lovely and well written poem about the season of the year that many of us do find hard to endure. Your W alliteration is very well done.
Patricia
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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This is such a lovely and well written poem about the season of the year that many of us do find hard to endure. Your W alliteration is very well done.
Patricia
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Patricia, I appreciate your validation!
Comment from Patty Palmer
You painted a picture of winter dying down and how spring moves slowly in. I could almost feel the breeze as the wind was kicking up a bit. The picture you put with your poem matched well. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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You painted a picture of winter dying down and how spring moves slowly in. I could almost feel the breeze as the wind was kicking up a bit. The picture you put with your poem matched well. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Patty, I thank you!
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Very visual poem, I could not only hear the wind but see it swirl the leaves into the air. I love the accompanying art work as well. This piece really sets a mood.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Very visual poem, I could not only hear the wind but see it swirl the leaves into the air. I love the accompanying art work as well. This piece really sets a mood.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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A. Louise, I am pleased with your connection.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, goodness, out of Six Stars already, unfortunately, and it's only Monday - this deserves that rating - please accept my virtual one. I enjoyed the read and its distinctive rhyme. Best wishes in the contest...
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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In my opinion, goodness, out of Six Stars already, unfortunately, and it's only Monday - this deserves that rating - please accept my virtual one. I enjoyed the read and its distinctive rhyme. Best wishes in the contest...
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Eve, than you for the virtual six.
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You are very welcome indeed, JLR, especially given the number of talented writers on this site and our minimal allotment of shining "Sixes" ...Eve
Comment from Minglement
This is a lyrical entry for the Rhyming Poetry contest. The rhyme and rhythm make for a smooth, delightful read. I loved the title and repeated phrase, Winnowing Winter Winds. From the use of 'Winnowing' to the alliteration. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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This is a lyrical entry for the Rhyming Poetry contest. The rhyme and rhythm make for a smooth, delightful read. I loved the title and repeated phrase, Winnowing Winter Winds. From the use of 'Winnowing' to the alliteration. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Mingelment, I appreciate your validation.
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You're most welcome ")
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello
I like the visualization of your poem. Good rhyme and flow. The presentation is nice and it matches the poem well.
The reframe is very intricate...well done.
Good job ð???
Gypsy
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Hello
I like the visualization of your poem. Good rhyme and flow. The presentation is nice and it matches the poem well.
The reframe is very intricate...well done.
Good job ð???
Gypsy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Gypsy, I delight that you enjoyed the intricacy of the refrain...
Comment from Bichon
The onomatopoeia excellent excels in this poem. With every descriptive sound, the poem edges closer from the harsh winter into the joy of warmer times. Fantastic job!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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The onomatopoeia excellent excels in this poem. With every descriptive sound, the poem edges closer from the harsh winter into the joy of warmer times. Fantastic job!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Bichon, I am more than impressed that you have such a solid grasp on the language and poetic application. I should be awarding your the six-stars! Thank you so very much!
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent ...
It works well with a good rhyme and smooth delivery its voice is constant and heard with a conclusion with a realistic and naturalistic meaning everything has a beginning and everything has an end only infinity continues everlasting and eternity has no beginning.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Excellent ...
It works well with a good rhyme and smooth delivery its voice is constant and heard with a conclusion with a realistic and naturalistic meaning everything has a beginning and everything has an end only infinity continues everlasting and eternity has no beginning.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Bicpen, I am so appreciative of your validation.
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anytime ...
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear jlr! I love the effect of the alliteration. The imagery is exquisite and the poem insightful!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear jlr! I love the effect of the alliteration. The imagery is exquisite and the poem insightful!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Rebekka, I am so very grateful for the wonderful validation the six-stars are the cherry to the sundae for me. Thank you!