Threads of Life
Free style poem/human suffering10 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write and anyone who has no regrets is not being entirely honest, but it is wise to forget the past and not let it mar the future, a poignant write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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A poignant write and anyone who has no regrets is not being entirely honest, but it is wise to forget the past and not let it mar the future, a poignant write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent poem about the elements that make up life. I would have thrown in the idea of tangled threads, as well as woven/stiched ones, as so much of out lives seems uncontrolled or mixed-up.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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This is an excellent poem about the elements that make up life. I would have thrown in the idea of tangled threads, as well as woven/stiched ones, as so much of out lives seems uncontrolled or mixed-up.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Yes thanks for that suggestion - life can be such a tangle at times ! zanya
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Great entry for the Free-style poem: human suffering writing prompt contest.
Nice poem about everything in life is needed for growth... even suffering.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Hello my friend
Great entry for the Free-style poem: human suffering writing prompt contest.
Nice poem about everything in life is needed for growth... even suffering.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Yes it's so true -thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a thought provoking entry for the Free-style poem: human suffering writing prompt. This poem should do well in the contest. Best of luck to you!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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This is a thought provoking entry for the Free-style poem: human suffering writing prompt. This poem should do well in the contest. Best of luck to you!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from BethShelby
I think the answer to this question must be yes. Like the experssion, into each life some rain must fall, we are all suffer from time to time. Hopefully we'll find more joy than sorrow in the tapestry of life, and maybe we can focus on the brighter colors. I like your free verse poem..
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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I think the answer to this question must be yes. Like the experssion, into each life some rain must fall, we are all suffer from time to time. Hopefully we'll find more joy than sorrow in the tapestry of life, and maybe we can focus on the brighter colors. I like your free verse poem..
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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Thanks for a great reveiw zanya
Comment from pome lover
this is a unique contest offering, I would think.
Wise and thoughtful - a handle on life.
Without delving deeply into suffering, this poem makes room for it.
Intriguing and well written.
pome lover
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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this is a unique contest offering, I would think.
Wise and thoughtful - a handle on life.
Without delving deeply into suffering, this poem makes room for it.
Intriguing and well written.
pome lover
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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I like that view 'delving deeply ..room for it ' zanya
Comment from MissMerri
A wonderful poem for this contest. What I liked best is the conciseness with which you made your excellent point. Life is, indeed, a woven tapestry of many colored threads, some bright and beautiful, and some dark. I hope this does well in the contest, because I love it.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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A wonderful poem for this contest. What I liked best is the conciseness with which you made your excellent point. Life is, indeed, a woven tapestry of many colored threads, some bright and beautiful, and some dark. I hope this does well in the contest, because I love it.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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A superb review zanya
Comment from Eternal Muse
An interesting, well artistically presented entry in the Human Suffering contest. I like your descriptive imagery and the topic.
Brilliant lines:
"Is suffering just another
pivotal thread?"
Very deep, excellent in every way, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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An interesting, well artistically presented entry in the Human Suffering contest. I like your descriptive imagery and the topic.
Brilliant lines:
"Is suffering just another
pivotal thread?"
Very deep, excellent in every way, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful presentation of the question for this contest -- we all must stitch our own cloth, how much will we allow suffering to push that needle..? Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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A wonderful presentation of the question for this contest -- we all must stitch our own cloth, how much will we allow suffering to push that needle..? Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Superb review zanya
Comment from TommyWrites
A very intriguing poem. It reminds me of a book I have read, the threads of life, etc. I really liked it, and it makes you stop and think. Which in my opinion is good! Your photo also compliments your poem very well. :)
Good luck in the contest!
TommyWrites~
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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A very intriguing poem. It reminds me of a book I have read, the threads of life, etc. I really liked it, and it makes you stop and think. Which in my opinion is good! Your photo also compliments your poem very well. :)
Good luck in the contest!
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thanks again for 6 twinkling stars zanya