Revenge
1 line poem5 total reviews
Comment from Melanie White
Loved it. It made me laugh. I can totally relate to the message and really like the picture you chose. It's hard to get your message across in one line, but you did it well. I voted for your poem and hope you win. Probably a semicolon should be used instead of a comma.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Loved it. It made me laugh. I can totally relate to the message and really like the picture you chose. It's hard to get your message across in one line, but you did it well. I voted for your poem and hope you win. Probably a semicolon should be used instead of a comma.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Hello Melanie and thank you very much for your encouraging review; appreciate your time and the generous vote.
Comment from UpNorth
Great picture with attitude. I like the enthusiastic exclamation point at the end. And the idea that older people can give themselves permission to let go and have fun is valid.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Great picture with attitude. I like the enthusiastic exclamation point at the end. And the idea that older people can give themselves permission to let go and have fun is valid.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Hello friend, I appreciate your time and am glad that you like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from Joan E.
That's just what I need--a rocking lama to take my mind off far too serious matters! I liked your wordplay with the intensifying of robbing to "killing". Best wishes in the contest and still chortling- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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That's just what I need--a rocking lama to take my mind off far too serious matters! I liked your wordplay with the intensifying of robbing to "killing". Best wishes in the contest and still chortling- Joan
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Joan my friend, I am smiling reading your wonderful comments, thank you; please take care.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I reckon we can all relate to the first part of your one line poem - time does have a knack of flying past and ageing us before we're ready! The rebellious and defiant amongst us will relate to the second part of your poem ;) - We're having none of this ageing nonsense LOL!
This is a well presented contest entry.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Hello :)
I reckon we can all relate to the first part of your one line poem - time does have a knack of flying past and ageing us before we're ready! The rebellious and defiant amongst us will relate to the second part of your poem ;) - We're having none of this ageing nonsense LOL!
This is a well presented contest entry.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Hello Debra, I am pleased to read your wonderful review; thank you very much.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is a hilarious rendition of the contest. I loved that picture! Your humor and wit hit the roof on this one - this should do extremely well in the contest, I wish you luck in the booths!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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This is a hilarious rendition of the contest. I loved that picture! Your humor and wit hit the roof on this one - this should do extremely well in the contest, I wish you luck in the booths!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Hello my friend, I am glad you like the write; I appreciate your time and the encouraging comments; thank you.