Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "October Morn"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Connie P
This is beautifully written, sad but not desperate. Thinking back on a life and realizing things done and not done, hoping for the best, but it's too late for change.
Very nice,
Connie
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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This is beautifully written, sad but not desperate. Thinking back on a life and realizing things done and not done, hoping for the best, but it's too late for change.
Very nice,
Connie
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thank you connie
Comment from Kingsland
this has a very unique way of saying something poetically. You have a kind of off beat rhythm to this piece that really works well here. This was just a pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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this has a very unique way of saying something poetically. You have a kind of off beat rhythm to this piece that really works well here. This was just a pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thank you again John for reading
Comment from Auroraboreal800
BEAUTIFUL poem! I specially liked the way you have examined every aspect of life, so many questions we all ask ourselves, but the questions asked in this poem were so profound...
Wonderful job!
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reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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BEAUTIFUL poem! I specially liked the way you have examined every aspect of life, so many questions we all ask ourselves, but the questions asked in this poem were so profound...
Wonderful job!
:)
Comment Written 27-May-2010
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thank you Auroraboreal
Comment from PUPA
deepwater, quite a thought provoking poem. We shall always have unanswered questions in this life, until the last moment. What do we really know? You see, you made me start thinking and it is already past 11 pm on my side of the world.
Well written, enjoyable to read and wonder.
Love
Pupa
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deepwater, quite a thought provoking poem. We shall always have unanswered questions in this life, until the last moment. What do we really know? You see, you made me start thinking and it is already past 11 pm on my side of the world.
Well written, enjoyable to read and wonder.
Love
Pupa
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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Night Pupa and thanks for reading Gary
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi deepwater. This is quite an interesting and thought-provoking piece of poetry. Yuor words are very thought-provoking too.
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Hi deepwater. This is quite an interesting and thought-provoking piece of poetry. Yuor words are very thought-provoking too.
Comment Written 27-May-2010
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thank you Wendy
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Deepwater ....
In this free-thought writing, you have surely expressed the sort of thoughts that pass through the minds of older people as they feel that it will soon be time to
end their lives on this earth.
There is just one small change to suggest ...
* You have - As I lay at rest ... this should be -
As I lie at rest ....
Thank you for sharing these thoughts with us.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Deepwater ....
In this free-thought writing, you have surely expressed the sort of thoughts that pass through the minds of older people as they feel that it will soon be time to
end their lives on this earth.
There is just one small change to suggest ...
* You have - As I lay at rest ... this should be -
As I lie at rest ....
Thank you for sharing these thoughts with us.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thanks for reading Nanette
Comment from percival86jack
A very poignant reflection on a life well spent. Many questions remain as you are about to cross over... did you do all that was expected of you or do you have any regrets. Very well written my friend... cheers, Jack
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A very poignant reflection on a life well spent. Many questions remain as you are about to cross over... did you do all that was expected of you or do you have any regrets. Very well written my friend... cheers, Jack
Comment Written 27-May-2010
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thank you Jack
Comment from Frozen Fire
I think this is just beautiful, and it expresses the thoughts that so many have as they come to the end of their lives. As long as there's some glory, then it was a life well lived. I heard a quote before saying "if you live to be 80 and can look back and say you've had 10 cumulative good years, it was a good life". Nice job with this!
Shirley
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I think this is just beautiful, and it expresses the thoughts that so many have as they come to the end of their lives. As long as there's some glory, then it was a life well lived. I heard a quote before saying "if you live to be 80 and can look back and say you've had 10 cumulative good years, it was a good life". Nice job with this!
Shirley
Comment Written 27-May-2010
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thank you Shirley
Comment from knowledge
Your going to have to have a huge gravestone to carve this epitaph on. You are getting better and better in your poetry writing.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
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Your going to have to have a huge gravestone to carve this epitaph on. You are getting better and better in your poetry writing.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thank you Knowledge for reading ths Gary one can but try
Comment from Gideon Roth
Good job on this. Good choice of prose in putting thought to paper. You should do well with this piece. Keep up the good writing...Gideon
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Good job on this. Good choice of prose in putting thought to paper. You should do well with this piece. Keep up the good writing...Gideon
Comment Written 27-May-2010
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thank you Gideon