Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Part 3 Chapter 5"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from The Stranger
Annas problems still seem to be a matter of her own weakness to let go of the past, she has the opportunity to go forward but seems reluctant to release the past
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Annas problems still seem to be a matter of her own weakness to let go of the past, she has the opportunity to go forward but seems reluctant to release the past
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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We will have to wait and see what Anna is doing. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Janie King
I've got to get time and go back and read some of the previous chapters. This is nicely done. It reads smoothly and holds the readers attention. I'd say this is a success. God bless.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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I've got to get time and go back and read some of the previous chapters. This is nicely done. It reads smoothly and holds the readers attention. I'd say this is a success. God bless.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written and shows Troy's determination to find Anna. There is a very smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good job.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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This is very well written and shows Troy's determination to find Anna. There is a very smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good job.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from WilliamDeen
Peach pie and vanilla ice cream! Yummy! Except we call it cobbler. Good work and a good addition to the story. Troy is determined to find her and I think I know why! So does Paul. Thanks for sharing.
One item.
You wrote: "Margaret smiled and made a few adjusted to the original shape."
Think you meant: "Margaret smiled and made a few adjustments to the original shape.
billy
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Peach pie and vanilla ice cream! Yummy! Except we call it cobbler. Good work and a good addition to the story. Troy is determined to find her and I think I know why! So does Paul. Thanks for sharing.
One item.
You wrote: "Margaret smiled and made a few adjusted to the original shape."
Think you meant: "Margaret smiled and made a few adjustments to the original shape.
billy
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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Thank you for catching that. I am an avid baker and pie is slighly different than cobber, but I love both. Are you from the south by any chance? I appreciate your kind review.
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Born, raised, and still living there. Cobbler, pie, it's all good!
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Some how I figured it out. I guess it shows, you need to add, "and proud of it."
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lol