Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Quest"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Kingsland
this piece has some good thoughts in it, but I do see a bit more that can be found in your writing in the future. I think you will see what others write and how they portray their poetic avenues. This is a fairly good piece. I found it to be well written. It was my pleasure to have read and written a review for it... John
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this piece has some good thoughts in it, but I do see a bit more that can be found in your writing in the future. I think you will see what others write and how they portray their poetic avenues. This is a fairly good piece. I found it to be well written. It was my pleasure to have read and written a review for it... John
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thank you
Comment from geoniasha
I enjoyed this poem which, in summary, says simply to make your own way, understand yourself and 'as (you) look down the farthest side of (your) life with age' realize that '(you are your own ) best friend.'
Proverbs 4:7 states:
'Wisdom is the principal thing; therefore get wisdom: and with all thy getting get understanding.'
Thank you for sharing. geo
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I enjoyed this poem which, in summary, says simply to make your own way, understand yourself and 'as (you) look down the farthest side of (your) life with age' realize that '(you are your own ) best friend.'
Proverbs 4:7 states:
'Wisdom is the principal thing; therefore get wisdom: and with all thy getting get understanding.'
Thank you for sharing. geo
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you
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You're welcome. geo
Comment from Jonez08
Hi deepwater, this is my first chance to review your work, very thought evoking piece. Several great messages within and you leave quite a bit to the reader's discretion, I took out of it--Live life to the fullness and to live with contenment and in a manner where you love yourself. I look forward to more of your work. Thanks for sharing
Cassandra
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Hi deepwater, this is my first chance to review your work, very thought evoking piece. Several great messages within and you leave quite a bit to the reader's discretion, I took out of it--Live life to the fullness and to live with contenment and in a manner where you love yourself. I look forward to more of your work. Thanks for sharing
Cassandra
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you for your comments
Comment from Nashi Pear
Its so great!!!! i could never be that good, its perfect and doesn't need any adjustments at all. By the 2nd stanza it was already painting a picture in my mind. You have a gift with words, and i think you'll become a famous poet one day - you just wait
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Its so great!!!! i could never be that good, its perfect and doesn't need any adjustments at all. By the 2nd stanza it was already painting a picture in my mind. You have a gift with words, and i think you'll become a famous poet one day - you just wait
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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Thank you for your comments Nashi
Comment from ArtGal
What a wonderful message within this poem. Yes, we are our own best friend, and if we can't live with ourself and do our very best, then what can we give to another? I liked this very much, and so glad that you posted...Sharon
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What a wonderful message within this poem. Yes, we are our own best friend, and if we can't live with ourself and do our very best, then what can we give to another? I liked this very much, and so glad that you posted...Sharon
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thank you for reading
Comment from SheilaPurvis
I like this poem. It is well written and flows nicely. I also like the style. The poem and the picture go together very well, also. Keep up the good writing...You seem to have a lot to say and you say it well.
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I like this poem. It is well written and flows nicely. I also like the style. The poem and the picture go together very well, also. Keep up the good writing...You seem to have a lot to say and you say it well.
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thank you for your comments Sheila
Comment from connied
This to me is the heart of the poem-- love yourself and everything else will fall into place.
good work,
Then will you be at peace with yourself
And to be able to say, I am my best friend,
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This to me is the heart of the poem-- love yourself and everything else will fall into place.
good work,
Then will you be at peace with yourself
And to be able to say, I am my best friend,
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from kleblanc
Great writing. Nice and lighthearted with a soft approach in the flow of words yet it conveys the message simply and entirely. Nice work. Keep it up. Kristy
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Great writing. Nice and lighthearted with a soft approach in the flow of words yet it conveys the message simply and entirely. Nice work. Keep it up. Kristy
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you for reading Kristy
Comment from Mariea
Hello again Deepwater. Another worthwhile piece. It's good to see another bushy on FS.
Structure - well put together and developed
Rhythm - good easy flow.
Have a great day, regards Mia
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Hello again Deepwater. Another worthwhile piece. It's good to see another bushy on FS.
Structure - well put together and developed
Rhythm - good easy flow.
Have a great day, regards Mia
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you Mia
Comment from AnnaLinda
I think that the theme of being ones own
best friend is very good. For the heart
of this poem I am givin you a five star
rating, but I don't think the poem itself
is that creative or poetic. I hope you
don't mind my honesty. I do see your
sincere thoughts come through it.
Linda
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I think that the theme of being ones own
best friend is very good. For the heart
of this poem I am givin you a five star
rating, but I don't think the poem itself
is that creative or poetic. I hope you
don't mind my honesty. I do see your
sincere thoughts come through it.
Linda
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you Linda for your comments and reading