Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "One can say,"A book of Poetry & Writing
132 total reviews
Comment from Charlene0513
To deepwater,
Whatever goal we set for ourselves I'm sure we all hope the recipients of our endeavors will be rewarded to our children provided that they will receive it with love and humility.
Charlene
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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To deepwater,
Whatever goal we set for ourselves I'm sure we all hope the recipients of our endeavors will be rewarded to our children provided that they will receive it with love and humility.
Charlene
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thanks charlene
Comment from emrpoems
A very profound and thought provoking poem espoused in simple way but causes us to stop and think
Life is a cycle and we can't expect from others what we ourselves do not do
Well paired picture and poem
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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A very profound and thought provoking poem espoused in simple way but causes us to stop and think
Life is a cycle and we can't expect from others what we ourselves do not do
Well paired picture and poem
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from GWinterwin
Great poem with a great picture. Good word flow talking about taking pride in our ancestors accomplishments. Good message with good thoughts.
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Great poem with a great picture. Good word flow talking about taking pride in our ancestors accomplishments. Good message with good thoughts.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Righteous Riter
The photo compliments the piece well as the words paint a clear picture in my mind. Good description and alliteration. This piece ends with a thought provoking question. Short but sweet.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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The photo compliments the piece well as the words paint a clear picture in my mind. Good description and alliteration. This piece ends with a thought provoking question. Short but sweet.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Tegan1311
This is a very well written poem. It's short but to the point. Your words flow well, your message clear and easy to understand. Love the question you pose here.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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This is a very well written poem. It's short but to the point. Your words flow well, your message clear and easy to understand. Love the question you pose here.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
I'm not sure what you mean by referring to a singular person's achievements having anything to do with the achievements of the collective! I would have thought that the singular achievement stands alone! But a well written work nonetheless! Well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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I'm not sure what you mean by referring to a singular person's achievements having anything to do with the achievements of the collective! I would have thought that the singular achievement stands alone! But a well written work nonetheless! Well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thanks Roy
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello deepwater,
This is a seemingly simple piece, but the depth of the words causes the reader to pause and ponder.
Profound statements. So well put.
Have a great week!
Sonali
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Hello deepwater,
This is a seemingly simple piece, but the depth of the words causes the reader to pause and ponder.
Profound statements. So well put.
Have a great week!
Sonali
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thanks Sonali
Comment from poetbear
Incredible.
I have soent tine in the NYC smaller Amnerican Indian museum which is the little sister to the one in DC.
You should send this to them.
It is a very important work.
Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Incredible.
I have soent tine in the NYC smaller Amnerican Indian museum which is the little sister to the one in DC.
You should send this to them.
It is a very important work.
Well done.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thank you poet ear you can send if you like
Gary
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Gary, It is Poetbear
Maddy
Comment from Kingsland
This poem gives the reader a lot to think about. What are we, but what has already transpired. What has transpired shapes who we are and what we will become. I enjoyed reading this poem. It made me stop and pause in contemplation on its deeper meaning... John
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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This poem gives the reader a lot to think about. What are we, but what has already transpired. What has transpired shapes who we are and what we will become. I enjoyed reading this poem. It made me stop and pause in contemplation on its deeper meaning... John
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank you John
Comment from Geoff Wiles
Very short but very true. We are quick to talk down what our forebears managed with what they had. How many of us will actually leave behind something for us to be remembered by except for by our families. We are but a grain of sand in the whole scheme of things and very few will be remembered long after they are gone. Well written.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Very short but very true. We are quick to talk down what our forebears managed with what they had. How many of us will actually leave behind something for us to be remembered by except for by our families. We are but a grain of sand in the whole scheme of things and very few will be remembered long after they are gone. Well written.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank you