Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Over the Top 1914 Eastern Front"A book of Poetry & Writing
238 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Freedom certainly isn't cheap and I don't think many people understand what soldiers go through fighting for our rights and freedom. It's always great to hear about one or just celebrate what they have done for us
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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Freedom certainly isn't cheap and I don't think many people understand what soldiers go through fighting for our rights and freedom. It's always great to hear about one or just celebrate what they have done for us
Comment Written 25-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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again thank you for the review
Comment from The Wood Work
Beautiful heart felt cry of a soldier past. I have not read the others but this write is moving. Great wording and rhythm. I found no errors at all...I'll be looking for your future stuff!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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Beautiful heart felt cry of a soldier past. I have not read the others but this write is moving. Great wording and rhythm. I found no errors at all...I'll be looking for your future stuff!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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thanks wood work
Comment from diane100
very thought provoking.Although I am not the best poetry fan this felt to me as if a real soldier had written it whilst waiting to find out his fate.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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very thought provoking.Although I am not the best poetry fan this felt to me as if a real soldier had written it whilst waiting to find out his fate.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thank you diane for reading this
Comment from Gooloom
Deepwater, you have written very well about the futility of war. The period is 1914 the first world war. Is'nt it?
What evil times has carnage chosen, for judgement on this land, you write in despair? But you have no alternative except to fix your bayonets and fight,maybe a war which is not your concern, but orders have to be obeyed. AmI right? Your verse is well written and very poignant as well. Gooloom
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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Deepwater, you have written very well about the futility of war. The period is 1914 the first world war. Is'nt it?
What evil times has carnage chosen, for judgement on this land, you write in despair? But you have no alternative except to fix your bayonets and fight,maybe a war which is not your concern, but orders have to be obeyed. AmI right? Your verse is well written and very poignant as well. Gooloom
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thanks for your comments
Comment from BeccaInaDaffydill
Thank you so much for writing this.
Wars that are not of "this" generation seem to be becoming slowly forgotten; poetry like this helps us remember, helps us appreciate what soldiers did all over the world.
What powerful emotions this evokes.
~Becca
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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Thank you so much for writing this.
Wars that are not of "this" generation seem to be becoming slowly forgotten; poetry like this helps us remember, helps us appreciate what soldiers did all over the world.
What powerful emotions this evokes.
~Becca
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thank you Becca
Comment from Charlene0513
To deepwater,
A poem addresing the violiate situation in which the veterns of the WW 1&2 paid the deadly that we may stand free and without disgrace to our country and it's leaders at that time.
Charlene
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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To deepwater,
A poem addresing the violiate situation in which the veterns of the WW 1&2 paid the deadly that we may stand free and without disgrace to our country and it's leaders at that time.
Charlene
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thank you for reading Charlene
Comment from kintesiegel
i guess since poetry means something different to different people this poem can have a lot of significance to the many people who have no idea that 10 or 11 billion were killed in world war one.
PS I didn't know you were that old.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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i guess since poetry means something different to different people this poem can have a lot of significance to the many people who have no idea that 10 or 11 billion were killed in world war one.
PS I didn't know you were that old.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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lol Kintesiegel and thank you for your welcome comments Gary
P S 1914 to 2010 hmmm 96 years + 16 that would be 112 not that old....smiling
Comment from mjfande
I must say, "WOW" to your poetry. I was not disappointed with this poem. This is another one of your poems that makes me feel honored to have men and women in my family who have fought for this country. Excellent poem.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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I must say, "WOW" to your poetry. I was not disappointed with this poem. This is another one of your poems that makes me feel honored to have men and women in my family who have fought for this country. Excellent poem.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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thank you for your welcome comments mj
Comment from thequillman
deepwater, Well written my friend. I enjoy your poetry. I can always count on your pen to take me back to times past. Times of remembrance of the price of war, it's heroes lives. thank you my friend. quill.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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deepwater, Well written my friend. I enjoy your poetry. I can always count on your pen to take me back to times past. Times of remembrance of the price of war, it's heroes lives. thank you my friend. quill.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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thank you for your welcome comments Quill Gary
Comment from afternoonlight
Absolutely a well written poem with powerful sentiment. I may be wrong but should it be "has carnage" instead of "have"? Really the word choices and phrasing are compelling. Loved it.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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Absolutely a well written poem with powerful sentiment. I may be wrong but should it be "has carnage" instead of "have"? Really the word choices and phrasing are compelling. Loved it.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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thank you for reading afternoonlight